|Reviews for Getting Brighter All the Time|
| FW Wandering chapter 3 . 9/8/2013
I want to see him find out about his daughter.
| Anna chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
Wow. This is just perfect. Why didn't you write the ending?
| Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Wow! Awesome little telling of the affair that went on between the two, I always wondered how it'd play out. This is a good version :D
| sleeplessinrio chapter 3 . 4/21/2012
Love the way you're writing this, super hot, and bittersweet enough to be awesome, as for writing more chapters, I would totaly read anything you write adding to this story, but it would be a morbid curiosity more than anythng, I mean talk about a desaster waiting to happen... there's no way there can be any happyness in their future, but that's part of what's so great about them, right? How everything is tinged with the certainty that the end is nigh, if you pardon the pun...
Well got a bit distracted there, just meant to say: awesome work!
| Johanniball chapter 3 . 1/28/2012
You should really continue with this one, maybe have some glimpse of Laurie too, if that's how far the story would go. Love it!
| Jdgon chapter 3 . 12/31/2009
I love the alternative story, yes, you should continue...
| gwynhwyfar llewelyn chapter 3 . 12/13/2009
| iceyobsurity chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
I just wanted to let you know I think your story and writing are really great. The way you write Eddie/Sally is awesome! Plus, who wouldn't love a jealous Eddie? Hollis/Sally are cute, but Eddie appeals to me so much more. I'm looking forward to seeing what you are going to do with the next chapter! Hopefully, some really romantic moments before Sally kicks him to the curb
Looking forward to the next chapter,
| LadyLinteweth chapter 3 . 10/11/2009
I have to wonder if Eddie ever suspected Laurie was his
| LadyLinteweth chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
I can relate. very good story
| Ariadne'sThread chapter 2 . 10/11/2009
...You do all this without a beta? Seriously?
If you ever need one, I 'd be happy to step up.
| Ariadne'sThread chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Having melted into a quivering puddle about halfway through that I'm not in the best shape to leave a comment but wow.
I love the attention nto detail shown both in the fic and the author's note: most people on this site pull Canon to bits, so seeing someone use artistic license with knowledge and a good reason makes me feel all warm and glowy inside :D
| TheFreshApple chapter 3 . 8/25/2009
I loved this, really. Great job.
| spedclass chapter 3 . 8/24/2009
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
| BetaReject chapter 3 . 7/1/2009
I really do hope that you continue with this tale. Though Im not really a fan of pr0n I think in this case it was an important part of the storyline given who these people are and how things developed between them.
What I really enjoyed is hte fact that you never really get insight into Eddie's mindset you just see it through his actions. The last chapter's ending spoke volumes and I have to say it has left me intrigued. You know this is a relationship that is technically doomed from the word go at the same time its hard to ignore just how they've become sanctuaries to one another.
I'd love it if you could continue with the development of their relationship something that goes beyond the bedroom even if its subtle like the way Sally is tempted to speak of the past or Eddie showing his affections for her by defending her good name.