|Reviews for Getting Brighter All the Time|
| Lyanna Star chapter 3 . 9/17/2016
Wow! Can't wait to read more
| TeamCarlisle chapter 3 . 9/3/2016
Any chance you'll keep writing? I just saw Watchmen for the first time and I find The Comedian to be such a guilty pleasure!
| TeamCarlisle chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Great chapter... reeled me right in haha
| blackmoon9793 chapter 3 . 1/17/2015
This is really, really good. I wish you would continue, but what you've got is great nonetheless.
| FW Wandering chapter 3 . 9/8/2013
I want to see him find out about his daughter.
| Anna chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
Wow. This is just perfect. Why didn't you write the ending?
| Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Wow! Awesome little telling of the affair that went on between the two, I always wondered how it'd play out. This is a good version :D
| sleeplessinrio chapter 3 . 4/21/2012
Love the way you're writing this, super hot, and bittersweet enough to be awesome, as for writing more chapters, I would totaly read anything you write adding to this story, but it would be a morbid curiosity more than anythng, I mean talk about a desaster waiting to happen... there's no way there can be any happyness in their future, but that's part of what's so great about them, right? How everything is tinged with the certainty that the end is nigh, if you pardon the pun...
Well got a bit distracted there, just meant to say: awesome work!
| Johanniball chapter 3 . 1/28/2012
You should really continue with this one, maybe have some glimpse of Laurie too, if that's how far the story would go. Love it!
| Jdgon chapter 3 . 12/31/2009
I love the alternative story, yes, you should continue...
| gwynhwyfar llewelyn chapter 3 . 12/13/2009
| iceyobsurity chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
I just wanted to let you know I think your story and writing are really great. The way you write Eddie/Sally is awesome! Plus, who wouldn't love a jealous Eddie? Hollis/Sally are cute, but Eddie appeals to me so much more. I'm looking forward to seeing what you are going to do with the next chapter! Hopefully, some really romantic moments before Sally kicks him to the curb
Looking forward to the next chapter,
| LadyLinteweth chapter 3 . 10/11/2009
I have to wonder if Eddie ever suspected Laurie was his
| LadyLinteweth chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
I can relate. very good story
| Ariadne'sThread chapter 2 . 10/11/2009
...You do all this without a beta? Seriously?
If you ever need one, I 'd be happy to step up.