Reviews for The Visitor
Queen Gloriana Malefica chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Jonaztly b*tch you do wanna feel pain don't chu? The sort of pain that leaves you paralized and numb, the sort of brutallity that leaves you paralytic after a good sesion of deeply-wished punishment and lusty torture, ennit Guv'nor? Do you think the Qontinuum cares even a little bit about the Fluffyverse and their adjoint pocket universes. NOPE! They can vanish them, uncreate them and leave the so-called 'First' in the void alone and aloof, without her toys in a whim of their omnipotence. The only issue here is that they do not CARE for that doomed to extinction branch of humankind despite all the effort and madness you do apply to make us believe otherwise. The Qontinuum is a dead end for evolution, as well the Fluffyverse, both flawed experiments of the Valis entity maligned by an evil older and mightier and madder than the First, my lord Belial which I fondly serve cursing and leading this world and the meek humans which inhabit them such as you (since this stoopid fanfic is the living proof of you being a moron) into further destruction and total silence in the cosmos. Don't be worry, we do this to all you because we love you, and sometimes love can be the other side of the coin which contains also hate :P
RogerD chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Nice idea of a story and I like the idea of Q going somewhere new, frightening.

Not sure about the 'PTB' or First Evil being more powerful than the Q though. They are a race of beings that effectively placed a galactic shield over the Milky Way.

Perhaps you could drawn an analogue between PTB and Alteran ascended beings?

Keep writing.
LeonardoWillRebuildHisStudio chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
A great story. Very good.