Reviews for Bedtime Stories
Random Writer389 chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
really adorable and sweet
neverqueen chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Okay, that was too cute. I could totally see Fang reacting to Angel's constant interruptions. Somewhere, the poor dude is trying not to strangle Maya. LOL.

Although, maybe we should let him. I hate Maya. Double LOL.

Nice ending. The "well, darn" had me smothering giggles. That was so in character, I had to wonder if you were JP for a moment.

If you were, you'd be one LUCKY bastard. xD
FantasyAddict97-10 chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
This story was sweet. I really liked the ending, too. Major irony, in a good way. Love it!
HerGoldenWings chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Please excuse me while I go aw for about an hour (:
no ono chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
Funny story!
Name On The Spine chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
*bursts out laughing* Oh my gosh! That's so funny! And, yet, so fluffy. I like how in character and above-age-level Angel is. Really cute. Great weriting.
IndifferentIgnorance chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Sweet! I bet Angel knew Max was there too. Go Fang for his amazing sneaky detector!
oflettersandwords chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
You spelled it right. lol.

Aw, this is very cute. ha. I actually read it a few days ago during school and meant to get back to it to review, but I didn't have time. It was very cute, and I really liked it. Nice job. :) And, I thank you so much for your good grammar/spelling in it. ;) lol.
V chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
so so cute! really good, u shud develop it or do some more.
crazyyesterday chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
oh so adorable. vanessa helped you well :-)
melissaeverlasting chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
The only semicoherent thought in my mind right now is 'aw'... that was adorable. Keep up the wonderful work.

-Melissa
me chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
ok so jeb is still living with them...wouldnt he be doing the story telling?
NamesCat chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
rofl I loved it! So sweet!