|Reviews for Daughters of three pt2|
| ShadowWolf chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Wow, this is really good! Watch out for a few spelling mistakes, mainly homophones. And, one more thing, there is five elements, but you only covered four. Time is a clear element in the book too. other than that, this is an awesome story! Don't listen to the haters! Keep on writing!
| lilly321 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
i love it the detail is very fine and well writen but with one problem
whens the next chapter comming out?
| Excrempus chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Love the story hope that you continue it soon, only thing I have to say about your writing is that no paragraphs made my eyes hurt and lose where i was just pointing this out. Any way take care.
| SanityIsOverratedXD chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
This is great. I love the Avalon series. But what happened to the first part?
| Alexa159 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Are you writting more chapters or are you doing a
'daughters of the three part 3'?
| The Ninth Layer chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Whoever told you that you could write must have been intoxicated at the time.
Seriously, what was going through your head when you decided to post this? It’s dreadful.
Do you take some kind of sick, twisted pleasure in mangling the English language?
Please, delete this.