Reviews for Neo One Piece
Zdogz20 chapter 26 . 6/18
YO PLEASE get back to writing this it's great there's not many OP fan fics that get to the grand line or new world that are actually interesting
regards
Future Nekomata chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
If the OC roles are still open, here's one.

Name:Nekomata Hikari ( she's called Hikari)

Gender: Female

Age: 3 (human form looks 21)

Race: cat

Appearance:In cat form, she is a rather small white cat with baby blue eyes and two tails. In human form, she is a petite young woman with a very flat chest. She is wearing a long white dress, white high-heel sandals, and carries around a white parasol (in which a small katana is hidden). You can tell she is not human by her cat-like blue eyes, snow-white hair, white cat ears, and twin tails.

History: Her village was made up of animals who have eaten the Human-Human fruit, or the Yokai Yokai fruit (a relative of the Human Human fruit that gives the user slight control of demonic energies, a demon-like appearance, and the ability to change to a human form, still keeping some demon-like or animal like appendages). While Hikari and her sister, Yami ( serious black cat with orange eyes( also ate the Yokai Yokai fruit)) where out hunting, pirates attacked their village and killed everyone else. The two sisters had completely different reactions to this. Yami swore that she would have revenge on all humans and she would put animals at their rightful place as the rulers of the world and she would enslave all humans using forbidden Yokai techniques. (Yami is a villain OC.) Hikari, on the other hand, wants to make peace with humans. She is also searching for legendary artifacts known as the five impossible requests, which are rumored to be able to increase one's ability by tenfold.

DevilFruit/Weapons/Abilities: Yokai Yokai fruit
Weapon: Katana
Special Attack: NEKO YOKAI RYU! ( cat's demon dragon( a beam attack of demonic energy from the katana)

Personality: Bipolar, Kleptomaniac, ADHD, usually happy-go-lucky, but can be serious, has a large milk, fish, and catnip obsession, has random moments of incredible intelligence

Likes: cats, fish, milk, catnip, shiny stuff, and toys

Dislikes: dogs, water, mean people

Dreams:To find the 5 impossible requests and to create peace between humans and animals.

Other: expert mouser, falls in love with most boys she sees, and can understand animals
Shadow40000 chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
woah...

Crescent dagger chrisanthia joinsa pirate crew :P

aww man.. i thought they'd be rivals :/
oh well xD
they'll do great together... -shrug

great chapter man..!
Shadow40000 chapter 2 . 8/2/2012
Awesome...!
'Cresent Dagger; Chris Hopkins!
Woah! He beat Crescent Dagger Chris Hopkins...! :o
Now thats a great mix in .
Great chapter man! :D
Shadow40000 chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
hey hey hey...
thats a pretty zooty start there :D
A unique one too! . Loved it totally :D
Please please start updating this story again :3
Blitz huh?
So what might be his real name? O.o
outcast247 chapter 26 . 3/14/2012
i want to know if your going to continue this story
congo77 chapter 26 . 5/17/2011
when are you gonna write your chapter?
77congo chapter 26 . 5/16/2011
to jin what do you think about being one of the weakest in the crew?

to cris how was it kissing a girl?
Wolffox17 chapter 26 . 3/7/2011
I'm glad that you updated! :) Poor Chris hopefully she will get her revenge on Jin and Gonzo for putting her in that position. I kind of hope that Chris and Alia get to fight in the future and that Alia sees that Chris is in fact a girl. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Draco Oblivion chapter 26 . 3/7/2011
Lol that was funny, the complete over reaction from Chris was hilarious and I didn't suspect that Alia would be the lieutenant at all. I'm guessin that the subplot will involve them fighting...

Btw well done for updating :)
Dthehalfdragon chapter 26 . 3/6/2011
Nice chapter. I cant wait to see the next one.
LaZy-RaIn-DaNcEr chapter 26 . 3/6/2011
Yay a new chapter! That Bane sure is a tough guy you definitely don't wanna mess with him lol Aw poor Chris that has to be hands down the most horrific experience she's ever had haha Loved how she was easily able to find Gonzo and Jin and how they ran away X D Oh so Aila is a marine looks like things are about to get really interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next! X D

Keep up the good work! Update Soon Please! _
SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 26 . 3/6/2011
Oh wow. She got hit on. XD Mistaken for a man, how sad for a woman's pride. Well, at least she can get her frustrations out on them.
SeeNoEvil121 chapter 26 . 3/6/2011
Oh. My. god. I have been WAITING for this! I was so excited to see an update and I stopped evverything I was doing to read it and let me say I'm glad I did! That whole thing with ALia - ohmigod, poor Chris! I couldn't stop laughing! No complaints there, so don't worry :D It's bound to happen when you dress and act like a guiy and insist on keeping your freakin cover! ANd Napolean's kinda scary... I wouldn't want to get on that guy's bad side...

I can't wait to see what's going to happen next :D
Redcap55 chapter 25 . 11/28/2010
Well, i apologize for not seeing this sooner, but simply put ive been getting on her less as of late. Anyhow...

It's cool to see the story continued, and even cooler seeing someone making use of Kiyoshi! I do wonder how he is going to get Blitz and the others to agree to taking him, but i am sure i'll find out soon enough.

If you need any info on Kiyoshi, feel free to PM me or something. XD

Oh yeah, and the scene with Chris and Alia was awesome. Touches like that really bring a story to life. Keep up the awesome job and i hope to see your next chapter soon!
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