Reviews for Full Moon
andrewpine chapter 20 . 5/17
I guess when or if you do a sequel you will explain about the girl they met at Peter and Char's that i guess is Jasper's mate and why her eyes are the way they are?
andrewpine chapter 19 . 5/17
She should have stayed in the house,but self sacrificing Bella never fairy boy has to suck out the venom once again. one of the boys should have stayed with her.
andrewpine chapter 18 . 5/17
I have a feeling that fairy boy has joined the two bitches probably thinking that if they can kill Paul he will be able to get Bella he can get rid of the babies and they can live in a sexless relationship until she dies of old age and he will follow her in death.
andrewpine chapter 17 . 5/17
I agree with you if you don't like then story move onto another one and don't prove how stupid you are by leaving hateful reviews.
andrewpine chapter 16 . 5/17
So fairy boy along mommy and daddy have shown Peter & Char show up to help?
Sam is an should be happy about the first pack babies and act like he is their she won't be able to phase,but they won't be without help.
andrewpine chapter 15 . 5/17
Of course we all know that the pill doesn't work against super shifter sperm.
andrewpine chapter 14 . 5/17
It's lose not loose,totally different words, they are going to have to deal with Vicky and Irena and a newborn army.i guess Tanya didn't know she is a shifter and not the human she believes she is?
andrewpine chapter 13 . 5/16
Bella /Jasper human/vampire,Bella vampire jasper you will have a Beta or pre-reader for that story.
andrewpine chapter 8 . 5/16
Your friends brother was right you did pretty good for a newby.
andrewpine chapter 7 . 5/16
That was a Paul is written as a how many are left to imprint.
Wonder when fairy boy will show up?
andrewpine chapter 6 . 5/16
It's told off Lauren.i don't get why so many writers on this site do not know the difference between the two words.
About time Lauren was put in her is good that Jake imprinted so he can stop being such a whiny bitch.
andrewpine chapter 4 . 5/16
Nice to see their relationship is have used a Beta to check your spelling.
andrewpine chapter 3 . 5/16
I don't know why she doesn't just bitch slap those two whores? i don't understand why the rest of those kids even sit at the same table with yeah,screw Mike.
andrewpine chapter 1 . 5/16
How does she have the gene is it through her father or mother? will fairy boy and his coven be coming back so she can kill him? will she be the only female wolf or has Leah already phased ?
could not the leeches smell the wolf in her if she were that close to phasing?
Guest chapter 7 . 5/14
Either bella is shy and quiet or loud and confident she can't be both because you'll confuse your readers
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