Reviews for Full Moon
Guest chapter 20 . 1/22
Guest chapter 2 . 12/17/2016
I'm enjoying the differences from twilight canon so far. I was very disappointed with perhaps the most important sentence of the chapter. "I held the screen door open for them to go in a once I stepped in my eyes connected with a set of warm honey brown pools that were staring back at me and it felt like everyone else had fallen off the end of the earth and it was only the two of us standing there." Come on, edit this! "I held the screen door open for them to go inside. Once I stepped in, my eyes connected with warm pools of honey staring back at me. It felt like everyone else had fallen off the face of the earth and left the two of us standing there." Or something, anything but a run-on sentence with missing, misspelled and unneeded words.
autumnsimril chapter 20 . 10/12/2016
The 1st Twilight story I've read. Really enjoyed. Like the Bella/Paul pairing. Will read more of your works.
andrewpine chapter 20 . 5/17/2016
I guess when or if you do a sequel you will explain about the girl they met at Peter and Char's that i guess is Jasper's mate and why her eyes are the way they are?
andrewpine chapter 19 . 5/17/2016
She should have stayed in the house,but self sacrificing Bella never fairy boy has to suck out the venom once again. one of the boys should have stayed with her.
andrewpine chapter 18 . 5/17/2016
I have a feeling that fairy boy has joined the two bitches probably thinking that if they can kill Paul he will be able to get Bella he can get rid of the babies and they can live in a sexless relationship until she dies of old age and he will follow her in death.
andrewpine chapter 17 . 5/17/2016
I agree with you if you don't like then story move onto another one and don't prove how stupid you are by leaving hateful reviews.
andrewpine chapter 16 . 5/17/2016
So fairy boy along mommy and daddy have shown Peter & Char show up to help?
Sam is an should be happy about the first pack babies and act like he is their she won't be able to phase,but they won't be without help.
andrewpine chapter 15 . 5/17/2016
Of course we all know that the pill doesn't work against super shifter sperm.
andrewpine chapter 14 . 5/17/2016
It's lose not loose,totally different words, they are going to have to deal with Vicky and Irena and a newborn army.i guess Tanya didn't know she is a shifter and not the human she believes she is?
andrewpine chapter 13 . 5/16/2016
Bella /Jasper human/vampire,Bella vampire jasper you will have a Beta or pre-reader for that story.
andrewpine chapter 8 . 5/16/2016
Your friends brother was right you did pretty good for a newby.
andrewpine chapter 7 . 5/16/2016
That was a Paul is written as a how many are left to imprint.
Wonder when fairy boy will show up?
andrewpine chapter 6 . 5/16/2016
It's told off Lauren.i don't get why so many writers on this site do not know the difference between the two words.
About time Lauren was put in her is good that Jake imprinted so he can stop being such a whiny bitch.
andrewpine chapter 4 . 5/16/2016
Nice to see their relationship is have used a Beta to check your spelling.
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