|Reviews for Guilt & Freefalls|
| mskathy chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
I really liked this description, "Though she suspected that the pieces were rarely used and that the spines would crack with relief at being opened. They would sigh at being stretched." - beautiful.
I love the details you sprinkled in so that we get a sense of time - that Edward hasn't played in six months, that they're in Alaska, etc.
The closeness you built and described between Alice and Jasper was lovely, the way she reassures him that Edward's choice to leave was eventual.. that he would have found an excuse.
The ending was awesome, and I really, really love how you wove that in. I wasn't expecting it, I was wrapped up in the plot of the story and that's pretty hard to do in a short oneshot. Kudos.
| Eri 'n' Ali chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
I loved the sense that Alice really needs Jasper to be okay, and that she had to lie to him, so he wouldn't be angry with himself more than he already was.
It was a nice touch with Jasper comparing himself to Robert Oppenheimer.
x-Erin Phoenix Jessica White-x
| spinkle22 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Awesome little story. I love the interaction between them, and you wrote with a mature writing style. The quote from the book was a nice touch. Good work! Spinky :)
| book-worm928 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
That was a great story, i would have never thought that jasper would blame himself for what he did to bella...
| wildcatjen221 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
This is great! I love the description of Alice's vision of Bella jumping...perfect! I hope you continue-this was a great read!