Reviews for No Turning Back
Bibliolympian chapter 3 . 9/27/2010
Alright, why aren't you updating?
raging hobo chapter 3 . 10/2/2009
Not sure why it took me so long to read this chapter, and maybe it would make more sense to me if I went back and read the others first. I don't know though. It just doesn't seem right to me. Perhaps the transition was just too jolting. Sasuke had a girl with him. I don't believe there was really any doubt as to who she was, and suddenly Hinata is there instead. I know you have a thing for exploring mindscapes and the human condition, but this just all seems off to me. Perhaps the next chapter will clear things up for me when you get around to writing it. We'll see.


say it's a new beginning,

But you only see the end.

I can tell that you're breaking,

When you only had to bend.

I can see it in your eyes,

You're trying to remember when,

We were happy together.

It can never be that way again.


It can never be that way again.


It can never be that way again.

The point I think you're missing

Is it's really not so bad.

And the times we left behind us

Are the best we've ever had.

But that doesn't mean the future

Has nothing to look forward to.

We just need to change the way we see

And be strong to see it through.


And be strong to see it through.


And be strong to see it through.
uzukun7 chapter 3 . 7/21/2009
why would she be so distant with naruto if she really thinks that that is him? why would sasuke continue the lie? youve definitely spiced up this story. in either case i hope you update soon. laterz
STAKH chapter 3 . 7/20/2009
again like still life this also impressed me,story is pretty deep and has alot of twists and you really have to immerse yourself to understand it and overall goodjob though im waiting to see whatll happen to hinata as she now takes sasuke as naruto,overall characters were portrayed well and i like this fic,do continue
Strawberry Raindrops chapter 3 . 7/19/2009
Gah this was awesome! :D i was so excited when i saw in my alert list that you updated! XD

Oh wow, Hinata seems a lot more aggressive and such in this ver. than the last one~ XD i like it. c: I shall be waiting~ *u* XD;
ww chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
This is an interesting sounding story. I don't quite understand what is going on yet (why were the two children captured? why hadn't Sasuke returned?), but I am curious to see what you will do with it. I liked the interactions between Naruto and Sakura in the previous chapter, as they struggled to rebuild their lives together.
Strawberry Raindrops chapter 2 . 7/13/2009
oh, please oh please continue soon~~ :D

i love this story! it's amazing even through just 2 chapters. It's not everyday I find such an amazing story!

PLEASE continue. you wont abandon this story, right? T_T please don't! send a reply saying if you will continue or not.. I just gotta know~!
Cranberry Scoop chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
This is amazing. Please continue! I really love where this is going.
raging hobo chapter 2 . 4/20/2009
Welcome back. Good to see you writing again. Fine work as always.

I had a dream like this before

Where I learned that life is so much more

Than just a fight to stay alive

So don't ever lose that fire in your eyes

glgkoo chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
well this was a new thing for me but it seems that naruto and sakura love eachother i think
IncandescentOne chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Wow, there was a lot of back story there without actually seeming like there was, a lot of openings or hints at things, very intriguing _
uzukun7 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
that is a very interesting read. the way you have constructed everyones relationships is very original and it makes me want to read more. i cant wai to see what you have planned for the next chapter. laterz