Reviews for The Missing Piece
AvidReader016 chapter 8 . 2/15
you really need to update this
it's very good and it's well-written
keep up the good work and update asap please
serenitylovegod chapter 8 . 1/13
I really enjoyed your story and would love to know how it ends. I hope you'll update and let us know how the story ends.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/6/2015
Please update soon x
AgentHumanTorch chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
Hey :'D

Your fanfiction is just awesome! I love the idea of the story, your OC's and how you are 'playing' the original characters!
Please don't break up and continue this ff, I would be so happy

Greetings from Germany
- Maddie aka. AgentHumanTorch

(Sry for my crappy english, the last time I spoke and wrote in english, is hundreds of years ago xD)
Rubix44 chapter 8 . 5/26/2015
Really good. Update ASAP.
Baby doll chapter 8 . 3/22/2015
Please update you left my hanging :(
TSCxHG chapter 8 . 3/1/2015
NOO! You can't stop here. And she hasn't talked to ahkmenrah either. Please, Update again PLEASEEEEE!
LeafeonLover chapter 8 . 1/18/2015
So who is Keith the reincarnate of Heb sadiki I'm not quite sure. This story is great by the best one I've read so far.
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
AND
UPDATE SOON!
DancingKitKat chapter 8 . 1/12/2015
I reaaaaallllllllyyyy hope that by some miracle you return to this fabulous story...
Verbophobic chapter 8 . 1/5/2015
Pokes the author. Hi :) I doubt you will continue this (three years old now) but I wanted to thank you for taking the time to write and post what you did. I'd loved what you have up and if you do ever post more I look forward to it.
penelope lemon chapter 2 . 12/27/2014
A very well written story! I'm excited to continue this and see where it goes
HarryPotterFrek chapter 8 . 12/24/2014
Oh my gosh I just read all the chapters in one sitting and I have to say this fic is amazing. I've always been too embarrassed to read Natm fanfics but when I saw the third movie, I realized how much I wanted to read an Ahkmenrah fanfic and I'm so glad I found this! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :D
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Update immediately, please!
OrangeSunset1701 chapter 8 . 12/9/2014
This is soooooo good! Please, please, please, I hope you continue this story!
Horsesrepic chapter 8 . 11/30/2014
Awesome story so far!Please update soon!
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