|Reviews for Alone with my love in the Digiworld|
| fighting hope chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
this is realy good for a ferst a temped keep it up and iam shure you will get beeter. dont mind about the speeling
| Digidestined of Trust chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Good story for a first time., Yeah, you don't need to post twice.
| ReimeiOokami chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Well since this is your first I'll be nice, it had some humar in and all but you could of put a little bit more emotion to get Davis into a humar state with the name thing.
I would like to point out that you spelt Yolie wrong, don't worry about it thou.
As usual most first storeys have puntuation mistakes (Trust me I've been there.)
Well I enjyed reading your story, hope I gave you 'some' usefull advise.
| spacemen chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Very sweet. I love the Takari and the taito!