|Reviews for Delayed Goodbye|
| Arielle chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
I love it! What you wrote is really realistic, i could really imagine Brooke thinking that when they were saying goodbye
ur a great poet keep writing poetry! :)
| wildmess chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Woah! this was just so good! I love Brooke and Julian and this moment just brought tears to my eyes! it was such a sad moment for the two and I think you nailed this perfectly! i especially loved this part:
"I didn’t just date for fun
You knew that and gave me the Letterman jacket I made you
Told me it means we’re going steady
And I was content with that commitment
So why’d you have to say I love you
And messed everything up"
That part just touched my soul! just amazing!
| jharvelles chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Favourite line would have to be:
'Did you know your grin got me weaker than I’d like?
Brown eyes illuminating with delight made irresistible with the right amount of sincerity'
You're an amazing poet, can't wait to read more from you :)