Reviews for Young Heart
yalinto chapter 17 . 12/7/2022
great story, love the gradual friendship.
the story is realistic and ends with hope, and That's a feat
Stary Wylk chapter 17 . 3/2/2022
The mean height of a Japanese girl of fifteen is about 140 centimeters. At 109 she'd likely be about eight or nine.
You characterize well. Akane's and Reiko's lack of empathy shows when saying Ranma is insensitive
Riniko22 chapter 17 . 6/26/2016
Thank you, I did enjoy reading your story.
Radio Driver chapter 17 . 6/25/2016
Good goin, Erza. Keep on keepin on.
Tibricel Tibby chapter 17 . 6/15/2016
Great story you have here I really enjoyed it is a fun read.
shugokage chapter 17 . 6/10/2016
Interesting ending great job!
cko2 chapter 17 . 6/10/2016
i very much think this chapter really needed to be added to understand the end of last chapter of why reiko came to be with ranma in school last chapter. this chapter really does have that helft felt added bonus that akane would do something like this to help ranma. I mean this really does bring home what happened and how much ranma changed in the story while he was a little kid dealing with rekio. thank you very much for writing this wonderfull little story.
Guest chapter 17 . 6/10/2016
Akane does so much for Ranma and he never realizes it or appreciate it. I don't think Reiko and Akane can'treally be friends with Ranma between then, especially if dumb Ranma pays more attention to Reiko than her. All Ranma does is care about a girl that he got emotionally this to as a kid, that he is neglecting Akane (as shown in class room). Maybe he's confuse over what he feels for Reiko when he's a kid. Well, hope he regrets it when he loses Akane to another guy.
Guest chapter 16 . 6/10/2016
Looks like Akane is going to have to give up on Ranma. He's such an idiot. He doesn't deserve her. She should move on so she won't suffer anymore.
Guest chapter 17 . 6/9/2016
This was one of the best scenes of the whole stories. Great job. (Though there was one minor typo right near the end: You left out the "it" in "Would it be alright if we became friends as well?")
cko2 chapter 16 . 6/9/2016
Intresting that you closecwith this chapter. I think it fits the setup you laid down from the starf. Thank you forvsharing.
salishious chapter 16 . 6/9/2016
Guess for sequel conversation... Reiko (of course)... Kasumi (only one who would want to see Ranma happy) and Nodoka
LongliveRanma chapter 16 . 6/9/2016
Loved the ending! So glad you continued it!
Guest chapter 16 . 6/8/2016
Впрочем, прочитав заключительную главу, пришёл к выводу, что описанный Вами Ranma всё-таки не заслужил к себе хорошего отношения.
Он, с одной стороны, крайне доверчивый. Потом, через некоторое время, уже недоверчивый, притом, как по русской поговорке "обжегшись на молоке - на воду дует".
Как результат - фактически забыл и бросил Akane.
Предельно искусственная ситуация. Всё-таки, что же Вы, таким вот образом, до нас донести хотели? Какой посыл?
Или просто "я Вам всем докажу", и чтобы - было?
Если так, то я - предельно разочарован.
Урока для молодёжи правильного - никакого. Одни только смущения и запутывания.
Очень нехорошо.
Перепродумайте и перепишите, что следует.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/8/2016
Вот как раз эта самая девушка, Рейка, и сможет помочь наладить отношения Ranma и Akane.
Просто потому, что она - нормальная.
Ranma для неё - мальчик. Да, интересный. Но - мальчик. Так что, автор наш дорогой, Вам стоит это учитывать!
Да, Akane завидует. Но как раз здесь и можно будет нормально описать. Ranma чуть-чуть подлечили. Теперь черед помочь и Akane. Вы не думаете?
Понадобится ещё не меньше двух глав.
Так что рановато вы галочку "complete" поставили!
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