|Reviews for My Wish Order Brother|
| freak over anime1999 chapter 22 . 8/17
*Takes heart out and neatly rests it on the floor, then go to Alucard, borrow his Jackel and promplty shots it into non-existence.*(Just to stop the pain) OMFG! I am legit crying! I swear to God I almost had heart attack when you say Diedara die. My heart DID stop when I read that scene about hell. DON'T DO THAT TO PEOPLE. Jesus! I haven't act this strongly to something in YEARS. I have an unbelievably big, raw and tender spot in my heart with the name Deidara on it. I love this story though. Just *Replace heart with spare*... Be more gentle next time. Okay?
| DarksiderForever chapter 16 . 8/16
Omfg the good ship Venus is an Actual thing!
*dies on the spot* 'Rinne Tensei!' Lelelel that's like the tenth time I've died reading this. Its soooo amazingly funny! Wheredya come up with this crackshit! Its fricking hilarity I've had to hyperventilate at least thrice because its1:30am my neighbours ate grouches and this shit is so funny. Intsa Classic. Idk when you stop but write more; You Must! For you have made it upon the fav section of a Naruto critic! (even thou I have 77ish i probably read 35). May your Fanon grow strong! :))))))))))))))
| Guest chapter 34 . 8/10
Please I'm begging! Finish the story! It's a great story. I'm crying now bc of u.
| Another.Professional.Tragedist chapter 22 . 7/26
Ahhh I am gonna cry this is soo good. TTTT
And the 'yeah' naruto's using. 33
| thelonelyjinchuuriki chapter 34 . 7/25
Congratulations on your marriage. I look forward to your next update.
| Kuroyuki no Ryu chapter 2 . 7/9
| Destructonite chapter 34 . 6/9
This story is so intense and serious most of the time, that it's shameful how much of a joke you make Jiraiya. He's known as one of the most powerful men alive, most likely top five, and you make him out to be so incompetent it hurts.
| naruto kurama chapter 2 . 6/3
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/18
... Um ya... Please update
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/18
| AquilineFeline chapter 16 . 4/14
*reads the... 'song'*
...what the shit did i just read
no, seriously, i need brain bleach now
But everything else is great.
| assasin1029 chapter 25 . 4/14
You sure the genre isn't comedy?
| assasin1029 chapter 14 . 4/13
Dammit. He should have just blown up that centipede and sliced her hands off so she can't do anything.
Naruto would survive anyways but he doesn't know about Kyuubi.
Or he should just wait till the poison is out of Naruto's system and then kill her.
| Luna Latanya chapter 6 . 2/22
| Pleasereadmything chapter 1 . 2/15
I hope you update, this is an incredible story with a great plot and amazing humor. It would be sad to just leave it where it is.