|Reviews for My Wish Order Brother|
| michael68 chapter 11 . 9/16/2009
Nice melodrama with Deidara explaining the facts of life to Naruto.
Deidara was unwillingly stuck with multiple fiancées, much like Tenchi Misaki or Ranma Saotome, so it’s reasonable to have several girls competing for Deidara who'd remain apprehensive towards females.
| Condor green chapter 11 . 9/16/2009
Go for E I say I think a serious pairing centric would ruin the fic, which is about brotherhood right? That and fics without pairings are so hard to find nowadays.
So yeah keep him single
| blackraven1412BR chapter 10 . 9/14/2009
cool can't wait to see more...
please update soon...
| the elsinatr chapter 10 . 9/13/2009
omg i like this story continue!
| Alayna36 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
*wishes for older brother too*
| random person chapter 10 . 8/30/2009
Love your story! Update soon )
| dragongirl5k5 chapter 10 . 8/29/2009
I luv this story so much! I always wished I had an older bro too...especially if he like to blow things up!
Anyway, I really hope you update as soon as possible!
| silverwind-39 chapter 10 . 8/29/2009
Awesome story and in my opinion, the best story I've ever read about Naruto getting a sibling
I really like how you portray Itachi
Please update soon!
| Kereea chapter 10 . 8/28/2009
Awesomw job on Tsume! I like how you're going to have her come around!
| Saiyoru-chan chapter 10 . 8/27/2009
Dude. Holy Sh*t that was hilarious!
'“With all due respect Ma’am, your giving me the impression that your a classless macho skank that loves to bitch. No pun intended.”' I loved that part! Still laughing!
I love your story and I eagerly await the next chapter!
'till then, sayonara!
| Simma chapter 10 . 8/26/2009
I loved it! Completely and utterly amazing! Please keep up the magnificent work! _
| Deidarakiller chapter 10 . 8/26/2009
Yo you should make Hana have a crush on Deidara to make itachi mad
| Firehedgehog chapter 10 . 8/26/2009
| Daoi Sidhe chapter 10 . 8/26/2009
But they did look alike, and even their scents were close enough; both smelt like chemicals, ramen though the younger had the under line of foxes while the smelled more like dry heat.
Think you meant while the other smelled more like dry heat. . I know it's a little nit picky but it was bothering me a little.
Deidara has such a mouth. It makes me chuckle ,3
| Daoi Sidhe chapter 9 . 8/26/2009
Itachi is making me laught. First mention of Hana and he is all over it.
His the Hokage - Think you me he is the Hokage.
Lovely work 3