Reviews for My Wish Order Brother
Kuroyuki no Ryu chapter 2 . 7/9/2015
Big Sister/Brother!
Maze reference...
Destructonite chapter 34 . 6/9/2015
This story is so intense and serious most of the time, that it's shameful how much of a joke you make Jiraiya. He's known as one of the most powerful men alive, most likely top five, and you make him out to be so incompetent it hurts.
naruto kurama chapter 2 . 6/3/2015
Lol!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/18/2015
... Um ya... Please update
Guest chapter 5 . 4/18/2015
Sandsharks? Lol
AquilineFeline chapter 16 . 4/14/2015
*reads the... 'song'*
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no, seriously, i need brain bleach now

But everything else is great.
assasin1029 chapter 25 . 4/14/2015
You sure the genre isn't comedy?
assasin1029 chapter 14 . 4/13/2015
Dammit. He should have just blown up that centipede and sliced her hands off so she can't do anything.

Naruto would survive anyways but he doesn't know about Kyuubi.
Or he should just wait till the poison is out of Naruto's system and then kill her.
Luna Latanya chapter 6 . 2/22/2015
waaaaaaaaaaaah!
Pleasereadmything chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
I hope you update, this is an incredible story with a great plot and amazing humor. It would be sad to just leave it where it is.
Razska's promise chapter 34 . 2/14/2015
Please update, I love this story line and want to see what happens if Naruto ever see's a iwa nin attack hi older brother (return of the yellow flash). The story is beautifully written and unique to any other story I have read.
Guest chapter 34 . 2/9/2015
Love it. I've been waiting forever for the update. I'm sad though that there won't be a sequel but I'm excited to see how this ends. Keep updating you're doing a great job
DeeaE chapter 34 . 1/22/2015
love it..
Guest chapter 34 . 1/4/2015
KEEP WRITING! It's really good!
LadyAdriander chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
Why would they? I'm a quiet person by nature.
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