Reviews for Itsy Bitsy Stuff
Codename-SN chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
And where really was the humor on this fic?
Though I'm not saying I dislike it. Quite the opposite in fact. But as brilliant as this idea is, it probably would've been better had you written a bit more. Added a few more characters, expanded a bit more on Lavi's thoughts and so on and so forth.
TangerineTea chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
This was really sweet- I really loved the line, "Don't you even think about falling in love with that boy, Lavi, you know the rules." I do think that the story might've been easier to read had it been spaced out a bit more, though, instead of being squished all together. Great job!
spader says hobey-ho chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Aw! That's just too adorable, it made me feel all mushy inside!
Hahiho chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Short but cute!