Reviews for Him
lookmeintheeyesnickjonas chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
aw your oneshots are so sweet:)) and well written! x
HashtagPsych0123 chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
i like this first i was like:"oh no!poor mitchie". then i was like"bad dan!i hate you" then later i was like"go shane!rescue mitchie!" then after that i was like"go mitchie tell him!he obviously likes you back!even if you dont tell him you're gunna end up together anyways so why hide it?" then at the end i was like"woohoo go smitchie!" haha...i am so weird!but great story!
CookieMonsterWillRuleTheWorld chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
naw, its so sweet!

Shippo7777 chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Aw, my favorite part was the phone call, Shane just sounded super worried! It was so cute. (And I realize I'm using 'cute' alot when I'm reading your stories, oops, haha)

Anyway, moving on, haha, I also really like Shane's reaction to the blood, actually, you know what, I like the whole thing!

You have a way with words, haha, :D

Kacee chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
That Dan is an absolute idiot.

You should get Caitlyn to slap him ;)

Haha, but seriously, this was such a great one shot.

I loved Shane's kindness and concern for Mitchie when she was hurt, I'm a sucker for stuff like that. D

And the ending, was of course, adorable.

Which was to be expected, I mean, you know how much I love Smitchie :)


envision2435 chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
aww it was cute i liked it !
PurpleAngel87 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
This was so cute! I really love your writing's so easy to imagine what's going on because you've written it so well.

I loved the whole idea behind this...I tend to love stories where Shane and Mitchie are best friends first, and this was probably one of the best I've read.

Well done!

secretlover101 chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
aww. i love it i can never have enough smitchi oneshts dan can go burn in hell b/c smitchie is the best pairing! lol.
Riley-the-Sadist848 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Totally sweet. I loved it ]
TessiLoveSVU chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
this was interesting! i hate mitchie! Shane is so kind and caring!
998569591595 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
as usual...


i love love loved it!

Peace. Love. Cindy. Jonas x3
Sugar911 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Once again, AMAZING!

good job!

Cutiepie2191 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Great story! Keep up the good work:)
hpswst101 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
That was cute. Thanks for posting.

fdjfhdsgjldsfbgjfgnfdl chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
awe! that was so good! i loved it:) it was very well written and very cute! excellent job and awesome story!