Reviews for Fuzzy Logic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story was so left field from what I was expecting and what I’ve been reading lately. But I loved it! I just devoured this story in under two days (there goes my weekend!) I couldn’t put it down! I REALLY enjoyed this story and it cheered me up when I seriously needed it, so thank you! |
![]() ![]() I really do enjoy this but I’m not to keen on the lovey stuff with kyuubi and minato not because of your writing it’s just I don’t like minato so I won’t be continuing to read this but thanks for the good read all the same |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is completely fuckedup... From top to bottom... |
![]() ![]() ![]() 7/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story started seeming a bit weak, but as it went on it became surprisingly good. Quite a bit of originality: reading Canon rehashes gers tired after a while... While also not being compelty Crack. Musume is quite a lovable character, despite how powerful she is, her clear issues flaw her enough to not be a Mary sue (even though she does have future knowledge, which is a rather big step in that direction when handled badly). Overall, a solid 8/10. The one thing that could use improving is the rather unclear timeskips. I understand them at first, as Musume went out of the habit of keeping track of time, but as it went on, if got quite confusing. And with how currently the FF app treats the front page as a chapter, this story is exactly 40 chapters long! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so is no one pointing out that madara was actually obito and that minato fucks his student turned girl foxy demoness la shit in a can of chillie beans |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'disAproving look' LOLz... this story is a good ballance of Crack and Non-crack... |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'visit MY favorite cousin' (missing the Y) THE LOLz... |
![]() ![]() ![]() careful with the 'genJutsu' -you have a G instead of a J... (multiple places.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've loved reading this story! Definitely being added to the favourites list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is that last sentence in reference to "Chunin Exam Day"? Anyways, I'm favoriting this, just thought I'd let you know, it was very good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, that rocked! |