Reviews for Never Enough
Effiny chapter 9 . 3/22/2010
I'm loving this story! You're doing a great job with it, I can't wait to see more!
The Rhapsodian chapter 9 . 3/20/2010
When's the next chapter? This is one of the most adorable stories I've read here... GIMME MORE!
GodGudKami chapter 9 . 3/11/2010
AW! This was so CUTE! You weren't lying when you said this chapter has lots of angst in it, but damn, was it hot! Adam's trying to make his way without Lawrence (idiot...), but Lawrence makes him call him, and whines about having nightmares! Lawrence, don't you think Adam would be having worse ones than you? You're so selfish... But at least it got Adam over there, even though he's scared that if he doesn't live his life 100% happily, that ugly a*shole will come and kidnap him again. Adam, being happy with Lawrence IS living your life 100% happily. And I just loved it when he got to Lawrence, too; Lawrence tried to be all tender and hugging, but Adam was all like, "Nuh, I wanna f*ck." Not that Lawrence had a problem with that, though. AW! XD
nicoleb chapter 9 . 3/11/2010
*Speechless.* This... This was so... HOT ("hot," not "hoot" XD)! Another smut-scene! Sure, it was short, but it was awesome! And all the angst before and during that... It's so cute! If Adam and Lawrence were mine (and in all my dreams, they are _), I'd upset them on purpose, because they're just so CUTE like that! Poor Adam... He's trying hard to live without Lawrence, but without Lawrence he IS hard, more so than he'd want to be. Okay, that was a bad joke, but it's your fault for subjecting me to all your smut! XD When Lawrence leaves Adam that message and Adam rings him back... AW! It was so cute and sad! Adam just kept refusing to go to Lawrence, because he feels like Lawrence uses him, but Lawrence got him over there by saying he has nightmares (although, Adam seemed pretty horny, so he probably would have gone to Lawrence either way 3), and when Adam gets there, he wastes no time on formalities and just... RAVISHES Lawrence! Adam makes such a great boyfriend that way, or closet-boyfriend in this case, since stupid Lawrence is still staying with his annoying wife and daughter. At least he's finally inwardly admitted that he's only doing that for his daughter, though, and that he can't do it for much longer. Maybe this means he and Adam will finally drop all the denials and admit their love openly! Not that all the angst isn't hot, of course, and the longer it goes on, the longer this fic lasts, and I'm all for that! _
Sammy07 chapter 9 . 3/11/2010
My GOD, this chapter was so HOT and filled with ANGST, which is also HOT! I just loved how Adam was trying to live without Lawrence! Silly little thing... Doesn't he realize that that's not possible? Well, unless Lawrence is dead and there's a hot OC floating around, but still! At least Lawrence had enough sense to call Adam and... AW! That conversation was CUTE! Lawrence tried to be blunt, but Adam kept refusing to come to him, so Lawrence had to admit that he had a nightmare and needed Adam with him to make him feel better! And Adam... WENT to him! AW! He's so sweet like that! Well, sure, part of the reason why he went was because he was horny, but that's beside the point! The point is that these two stubborn morons seem to finally be coming to terms with their love for each other! I hope that's the case, since, as hot as angst and denial is, I'm about ready to clobber these two adorable idiots for delaying their love-admissions so long! _
jigsawsl8n8 chapter 9 . 3/7/2010
damn it stella! why do you always make me cry! I don't have any handkerchiefs left! serieusly! they'rs so cute. there are no words for it! they're so broken en they belong together and oh god I just love them! I love them. there is nothing more to say they're meant to be and I'm meant to love them forever! when Adam layed down in Lawrence arms, I swear I just started sobbing because it's so beautiful! wow... I'm ranting! but serieusly I love it!
nicoleb chapter 8 . 12/22/2009
Aw... Adam and Lawrence just keep denying and denying, and getting more and more depressed, don't they? Normally I wouldn't feel sorry for such morons, but... Well, they're just so adorable and hot, so I think it's only natural that my heart bleeds for them. 3 And AW! Adam calls Lawrence on the phone, because he's at the end of his tether so much that even the drugs aren't helping anymore! And he cries when he talks to him! Adam crying is so cute. If he were my boyfriend, I'd hit him all the time, just because it'd be so cute to see him curl up into a little ball and start crying like a little wuss! And I'm not even going to point out how freaking ADORABLE (I really overuse that word, but it's Adam's fault for being so... adorable XD) it was when Adam pretty-much said, or half-said, that he'd die if he didn't see Lawrence again, and then they just stayed on the line, wracking Adam's phone bill up, and Adam fell asleep from Lawrence's erotic... I mean, "soothing," breathing! AW! _
GodGudKami chapter 8 . 12/22/2009
Poor Adam! He's so miserable! Luckily, Adam's so cute when he's miserable, so it's not as sad as it could be. Aw, I loved the reference to his childhood where his mom made him pancakes early in the morning because he couldn't sleep. He was an insecure little thing even then! _ And it's so cute how Adam thinks of Lawrence as his "doll," but how he's apparently too perfect for him. Adam, I think you're forgetting how hot you are; no one in their right minds would refuse you. And I'm sure someone would make a show about you, too, assuming it was heavy, gay porn. But I'm getting off-topic, aren't I? XD Damn, Adam and Lawrence are so miserable! But Lawrence really needs to get that Allison is only making him unhappier. At least Allison seems to realize that, too. Maybe walking in on Lawrence and Adam having rough, experimental s*x will convince her completely? _ Well, Adam's called Lawrence, so that's something, at least. Maybe drugs really are good for you? At least for Adam, since they seem to give him courage to call Lawrence and confide to him! Adorableness!
Sammy07 chapter 8 . 12/22/2009
AW! Adam is so CUTE! He watches a children's TV show in order to try to feel better about himself and about how he's so eager for Lawrence's c*ck! His denying is so sweet! Rather than just go over to Lawrence and suck him off, he has to sit on his couch and dwell in childhood memories! AW! XD And it's so cute how Lawrence calls Adam STUPID, even stupider than him! Well, at least he seems to know that they're both denying idiots. The sooner Allison dies (or at least p*sses off XD), the better. I'm glad the drugs Adam is taking like a stupid but cute moron are at least doing something good, though, IE, giving him the courage to call Lawrence and sob quietly while he talks to him. Not only will that allow for some adorable hurt and comfort before long, but it'll also allow me to gush over how adorable it is when Adam cries! *Does that.*
LeighWhannellStalkers chapter 8 . 12/20/2009
Eep~! Ahh. I can't wait for chapter 9.

Poor Adam~3
jigsawsl8n8 chapter 8 . 12/20/2009
aw! so sad. our two sweethearts are sad! but I hope Lawrence gets over his stupidity now and goes to visit Adam. AND NEVER LEAVES HIM AGAIN! oh how I love them!
Merel De Grauwe jigsawsl8n8 chapter 7 . 10/23/2009
aw! they're both going to have to change if they want to be together and since they litarly can't live without eachother (how can it be that they didn't got that yet ?) they will change, Lawrence will divorce his wife and Adam will love him forever :)
nicoleb chapter 7 . 10/22/2009
AW! So full of cuteness and denial! I don't know how Lawrence got through med school with such stupidity like he's expressing in his denial to make a life with Adam now, but he couldn't have actually passed honorably! Maybe he performed sexual favors for his (hot male) med teacher? Ah, well. Either way, at least Adam is letting Lawrence know what a moron he's being, because the first step to moron-recovery is knowing you're a moron. And screwing Adam a few more times will probably help, too. The more they screw, the more Lawrence will think, "Man, I can't leave that hot piece of ass alone for even one second!" and the closer those two will be to happiness and salvation. Aw. XD I've gotta say that I love the denial, though. It's just so CUTE how stupid those two can be sometimes! 3
Sammy07 chapter 7 . 10/22/2009
AW! YES! That's right, Adam! Stand up for yourself! Tell Lawrence what a blind moron he's been for wanting to stay with Allison! Hell, we all know he'll leave her eventually, but ADAM doesn't know that, so he's within his rights to be snarky! I mean, Lawrence admits that Adam is hotter, nicer, and understands him more than his ugly, mean, non-understanding wife (soon to be ex-wife) EVER will, and yet he still refuses to leave her and go to live with Adam? You really don't have any balls, do you, Lawrence? I wonder how many chapters it's going to take for him to grow some? Hey, Adam, I'm sure Lawrence's balls will grow faster if suck him off a few times... *Hopes Adam will buy that.* _
GodGudKami chapter 7 . 10/22/2009
OH, NO! Adam and Lawrence are separating! I know it won't be forever (Hell, even THEY'RE smart enough to admit that they won't be able to stay away from each other, and they're pretty stupid in terms of denying and whatnot XD), but it's still sad to think of how many lonely, s*xless nights they'll have before they come to their senses completely! And d*mn, Adam is harsh, telling Lawrence Jigsaw picked him for a reason other than the fact that Lawrence was the one who told Jigsaw he'd die and because Jigsaw had small-p*nis-envy (which is why he picked Adam, too). Adam's lucky Lawrence is enough of a horny pussy to take that! Maybe Lawrence will get his own back later with some spanking, though... *Fantasizes.* XD
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