Reviews for Watching Him
juniemoon chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
This is by far my favorite Billy story. Thank you!
tk-fan-4ever chapter 11 . 1/27/2011
luv this story! billy darley's awsome!)
leeseelee chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
awesome story! loved it!
lauraxxx chapter 11 . 8/19/2009
Omg I loved this, I cant believe I didnt find it until now, it was brilliant! Ah!

Cant wait to read more of your stuff
Vita Venio chapter 11 . 6/17/2009
Fantastic story.
Anaeli chapter 11 . 6/16/2009

Wow! what can I say? This is the kind of relationship I can imagine Billy Darley in. Great and awesome job!

You rock! and you know it!

Keep writing!

Shoezies chapter 11 . 6/14/2009
*sniffles* Tear jerker of an ending...It was fantastic!

And YAY! Ficlets! Can't wait!
AJ-Sparrow chapter 11 . 6/14/2009
Beautiful ending. I can't believe how truly talented you are- this is a great story. I can't wait for the humorous ficlets- there are so few stories that have a happy ending for Billy Darley but are still realistic, and this is one of them. I think some humorous ficlets are the perfect thing to top this off. Again, I can't express how much I love this story. Great job.
Superdani4Ever chapter 11 . 6/14/2009
"She's mine; ya can't keep her from me!"-cute in a very demanding way.

lovin' you feels good-aw!

FreeBorn chapter 11 . 6/14/2009

Honestly. I mean, s'cool how everyone loves Beth 'n all, seeing as how it's kind of impossible not to, but now that Billy and Beth have the free-and-clear to go have madsex all over the chapel floor and live happily ever after, he really just needs to fuck off with his misplaced older-brother responsibility syndrome.

It's awful cute how Beth diffuses Billy's temper so easily, though. That's all the poor boy needs P; somebody who understands him and loves him enough to help him through his anger and whatever other shit he inevitably gets himself into.

Oh no.

I can practically hear the end-credits rolling! -sniff- it's coming to an end!

It's nice that you ended it with all the 'boys' getting their respects paid to them, and getting a proper send-off c:

I don't really need to, but I'll reiterate once again how FREAKIN' AWESOME you are, and while I'm sad to see this fic end, you did a fantastic job with canon characterizations from the movie, and a flawless job inserting your own original character into the melee. All your writing is gorgeous - you capture emotions very well, and it's hard not to get attached to the characters as you write them and the (angsty!stressful!awful!amazing!) story-lines and situations they get put through x}

You did a marvelousamazing job once again, and I can't wait to read more about Billy and Beth in future ficlets. 3
FreeBorn chapter 10 . 6/10/2009

I just realized how ridiculously fucking long my last review was, so I'mma keep this one short and sweet, and not ramble on and on (and on) nonsensically, as I am so wont to do.

This was great.

I am so, so so glad that you didn't kill Billy x_x Seriously. I wouldda had to slap a hoe. But this was very sweet and cute and fluffy, and I liked it :}

Doc was a great character. "Sir, she calls me. God love these young ones.' lol, he's so adorable. I'm interested to see if Billy is gonna replapse into his patent ASSHOLE once he's off the drugs or not, but I really hope that he and Beth can just live happily ever after already - though it has to be noted that most mobsters hardly ever live happily, and certainly not ever after x: He should give up the family business and go make BillyBethBabies. True facts!
Anaeli chapter 10 . 6/10/2009
Hey! OMG! *tearss!*

yay! you didn't kill him!

Keep writing!
Superdani4Ever chapter 10 . 6/10/2009
Y’ were the best thing, jus’ never saw it till now-aw

“Sir she calls me, God love these young ones,”-LOL


I was so worried!
Shoezies chapter 10 . 6/9/2009
YAY! Billy's ok! Well, he's got two extra holes in his body, but he's alive! Nicely done!
kmcracerx chapter 10 . 6/9/2009
So, overall, it's been a good night. The Pens won and Billy's alive! Yay! Although, you did make me tear up.

I guess having something to live for, even though he said his goodbye to Beth, really does make a difference. And I believe Billy would have been ok with dying, knowing he did it protecting her. But then there's Beth, still seeing Hume's p.o.v., even when he's pointing the gun at her. Damn that Hume.

But what happens next? Sure Billy's being 'open' with Beth, now that he's looked death in the eye, and is probably doped up a bit. How's he gonna treat her when he's up and running again? And what will she put up with? Are Eddie and Sam gonna step in and try to shield her? Oh - the possibilities.

Definitely a good one. And I'm waiting (not-so) patiently for the next part.
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