Reviews for Breaking Down
storyluvr94 chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
You should continue. Maybe like _ years later... (It could end up REALLY great)
SenatorSkywalker chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
u should continue this story! its a great way 2 start 1! if u want, i could help u write it!
katiebug1297 chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Oh, that's sweet.

I love your emotion! You make it seem real. That's a good skill to have.

And it was like her character, some people make stories and their characters are totally different from the characters on TV, they don't think or act the same. You're a really good writer! But it's a bit short...Oh well, I loved it anyways, please keep writing!
AliciaPeplova chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
i love the film crossroads (its got britney bitch in! yayayaya)

Ur writing is really full o femotion! Keep writing (if u havnt said it all already)!

Check out out my profile and story!

Dont forget that i will always love you Baby!

Alicia X

(see u later tonight _)
SereneCalamity chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Very, uh, short.