Reviews for Between Four Storeys
noname00 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Well his job surprised me but anyways nice fic
mellyd chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
I loved reading this oneshot! It gave me butterflies at the end. Good Job!
Kenjutsu2Princess chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
very cute
Mik chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Yay, awesome fic. Getting stuck in an elevator with Kenshin would be fun. Agh, I hate anime characters with a passion. They're all so cool and you know you'll never meet them in person. But this was really cute. I actually like the Kenshin Kaoru pairing a lot and you painted a picture nicely. This story could have been a little longer but just because I really liked your idea and would have liked to see it developed further.

Thanks for the story to light up my afternoon.

Mik
1kenshinlover chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
I thought for a second he would be the owner of the company. Him being a janitor is very cool. Great one shot!
nightshade belle chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
omg that was so cute 3 the janitor! why didn't i see that coming? People who write rurouni kenshin fanfic never put kenshin in any mediocre jobs so i just did not see it, lol. Brilliant, lol
AshmandaLC chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
this is adorable! i think they both needed that little dose of reality ;) good job!
reader chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Very sweet, very enjoyable story! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Adelaide MacGregor chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Well done
KiT72 chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
aw...that was cute... 3
VellaVee chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
wow that ending really wasn't expected. I was thinking Kenshin was actually some kind high powered CEO guy. Way to through it that little twist. I love it _ poor Kenshin thought Kaoru wouldn't notice him. Ah I'm gonna go read it again

Just one thing tho, it would be nice if you could put in words for the japanese translation. I have no idea what datte and ski taiski mean. Although where you trying to put Daisuki? pronounced daiski because that means "i like you a lot" and I couldn't find the meaning of Taiski anywhere :\

Anyway great one shot I kinda wish I could see what happens next with Kenshin Kaoru, makes me wonder if Kenshin is trying to do anything else with his life and all if he's so unhappy with his current job position hehe

Silver.
Clueless Girl chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
beautiful! )

thou i suggest u put the english translation for the Japanese words u used!
MapleDumplings chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
A beautiful girl who wouldn't even look at me twice...hehe that was a nice one-shot, probably the only Samurai X one-shot I read:))
yukino-sohma831 chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
hey, nice beginning...am just wondering...have u watched 'love shuffle' by any chance? its just this story has a similar opening...4 people locked in an elavator...if u havent i highly recommend it!
Mythirll chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
It was good but what does datte, ski and taiski ,mean?

Good story can't wait to read more!

M.M
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