|Reviews for Struggles|
| whertiy chapter 3 . 4/10/2009
I loved this chapter! PLEASE let there be a happy ending!
| Coolio chapter 3 . 4/10/2009
Wow. I love your story so much! I printed the entire thing and it's my most prized possession!
| Go-Go Spiders chapter 3 . 4/9/2009
This is amazing. I'm not sure how many times I'll be saying this over the course of the story, but it is. Dr. C and Monger are both amazingly in character, and the plot is shaping up to be very exciting! :D
| BasementOfTheMansion chapter 3 . 4/9/2009
Well, I took a break from laboriously trying to write some of my own MVA fic to check my email and SURPRISE! An update. You are so the best.
Let me just say (again) that I love, love, LOVE how you write Dr. Cockroach. So logical (immediately taking stock of what he can make with used gum, lights, a screw and a mirror) and fastidious in the oddest ways.
| BasementOfTheMansion chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
Hmm... That's somewhat disappointing about the updates, but a story this good is worth the wait!
BOB going "Oh no she di'int" made me chuckle, because it was SO in character and funny.
Dr. C staring dreamily at Susan as his marshmallow incinerated was so cute as well. In fact, everything in the campfire section was incredibly funny and well done and keeping in a fun, casual tone. Which made the next development even more jarring and discordant.
Because OMG! That was so amazingly written when he was captuured! The suspence and danger were clear, yet you kept the slight detachment and politeness of Dr. C's characterization intact (like calmly greeting the soldier... SO him!).
And I love your characterization of Monger, too. The mix between duty and personal feelings... And duty ultimately winning. It's very good... Keeps things in a gray area.
The radio bit was perfectly set up as well... It was set up so long ago, then was a natural precaution, and then served well as a warning device. And the forethought to destroy it was also well thought out.
Fluff AND action... You certainly are a jack of all trades!
Well, next chapter certainly looks ripe for a Susan POV... Then again, keeping things up in the air longer and remaining with Dr. C certainly would draw out the suspence... I'm sure whatever direction you go it, it'll still be an excellent read!
| Prinzzez Kitten chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
WOO! I read part of this in school then it was in my mind ALL DAY!
| jla2snoopy chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
Whoa, what a chapter! And what a cliffhanger!
In the words of Link: "Finally! Some action!" Not that fluff is bad, it's just great to see that what they had dreaded has suddenly come to pass. My guess is that they'll go after him (at least Susan and Link will). This would totally be an awesome opportunity for Susan to use the quantonium gloves! And because of this I bet Link will find out just how close they are even sooner than before.
this was kind of sad, too..reality has caught up to them. Are we going to get an explanation from Monger as to how he tracked them?
Hope you update soon! And don't worry about the Tuesday thing. Real life should always come first.
| Vellace chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
Wow i've read all the stories so far and i have to say their nothing short of amazing. I have to say these stories have been my favorite so far. I can't wait to read more!
| Faith chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
I can't wait to see what happens next! This is gold! :)
| whertiy chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
I cried for two reasons with this chapter-
1. It was so sad, and I really did cry
2. You won't be updating as often, and I check here about 10-20 times a day to see if you updated. Maybe this will help me with my addiction to your story. I really need to get out more.
| Coolio chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
PLEASE LET THERE BE A HAPPY ENDING!
| XxxxxOttanyxxxxX chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
I wanta cry now(crys) this chapter is so sad...Update soon!
| BasementOfTheMansion chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
AWAH! They're still in bliss mode! It's so sweet! And Link's terribly suspicious of them. Susan's amazingly subtle smile made me chuckle. And BOB has a new object! (Aww... Jello's untimely demise. She was so young!)
I like that Dr. C is the only voice of reason vis a vis their living situation. Oh, change is on the wind...
Excellent, excellent, and did I mention that YOU are all that AND a bag of chips?
| Dolphinlight chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Great! Hooray! Another story! I'm adding it as a favorite!
| Fuzzybuni chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Nice start to the last installment of your story.