Reviews for Pieces
jazzy2may chapter 5 . 5/10/2016
adorable story and happy to read the sequel. ;D
general zargon chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
LOL, poor Iruka, he just declared war on Kakashi, didn't he? ;P I really enjoyed this story, especially the way you wrote Kakashi and a younger, more pranking-inclined Iruka. :) I noticed some typos scattered through the chapters, but those are normal and not really major. I hope you write more for this fandom and pairing!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/5/2014
Haha cute!
Clover letter chapter 5 . 8/18/2014
this is good n_n
AccountKiller500 chapter 5 . 7/19/2013
This was fun. :D
kaori and yoshi chapter 5 . 6/15/2013
that was so hilarious! i could read this over and over and over. SO AWESOME!
sairakanzaki chapter 5 . 2/14/2013
this story is great...Poor iruka beaing teased by Kakashi
Guest chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
Hahaha cute! XD
Immortalis Cruor Elf chapter 5 . 3/8/2012
nice nice nice!
Hero Of The Hazard chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
[and genjutsu the Hokage's office)]

Poor Hokage! If Naruto transforming into a girl isn't bad enough, he's pranked constantly? Poor guy's going to go insane. D:

[Iruka's third task was to steal a kiss from a member of ANBU.]

Dang it, I was hoping it was to steal his/her mask. xD

(Then again, I guess you have to take the mask off first to kiss said ANBU.)

["Chuunin? Then why are you in the Forest of Death?"]

Them dang kids and their rites of passage into their ranks and things! *Rants*

["I choose Anko…" Here Kakashi looked mildly surprised. "… and stuffed them in someone's pocket before she could track me down."]

R.I.P, poor soul.

["Kiss a what? A tree? A bird?"]

A ninja!


Wait, seriously? xD

[Iruka shook his head slowly, though he was sure Kakashi already knew. There was a sly grin on that face, hidden under that mask and behind those eyes.]

...must happen a lot. A common enough occurrence in the ANBU, I suppose.

["An ANBU!" he growled, glaring daggers at the smirking man.]

Yeah! A ninja!

["And your plan of seduction involved throwing a kunai at my face?"]

Why, yes, didn't it work? 83

No? Awww...

[When he glanced back, it was only to see Kakashi inches away from him.]

Ahhh! *Points* Ninja!

...wait. ._.'
narutofan chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Anju-chan2 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
The Copy Nin traced long fingers across his jaw and temple, as if making sure that the mask really was gone. His red eye seemed to stay focused on Iruka, even as it and his other eye swept the ground to glance at the porcelain pieces.

- it must have been weird to see someone with one eye looking at you then one eye looking somewhere else. LOL
Shippogrl29 chapter 4 . 2/2/2011
Love this Fic! Haha, Iruka is so innocent. I can't help but feel Kakashi is a big cat stalking him around! A predator! haha, what's funny about this chap is when I fist saw tomoes on this page, I thought you said tomatoes. Tomatoes, heehee.
melissen chapter 5 . 12/19/2010
his was great!
Mona chapter 5 . 8/24/2010
Hi! I love this fic It just makes me smile so much! 3
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