Oh my gosh, that was intense for my anticipation

It’s calming down

Wow just wow

Ooh

My heart is beating quite fast

So heartbreaking, I cried at the end because of the return to forks and why

This chapter was absolutely beautifully written. I love that Edward needed that “yes” after everything Bella had gone through. And I loved how he used his vampy senses to be in tune with her body. And then Bella falls asleep safe in his arms ugh so cute!

I loved this story so much and hated to see it end. Great writing and I loved how everything came full circle. Thank you for sharing.

i teared up so much while reading this . I adored all the hurt/comfort and angst. Gosh this story was so intricately written !

Such a sad ending but absolutely perfect!

such an amazing read! i fell in love with all of your charaters. thank you dearly

'it does in mine' this is such a great add in. im reading this story so fast its amazingly good

billy black is a manipulative self serving prick to the bone

Thank you for writing and sharing this story. I think it helped me a litte to heal a small part of me. You deserve 56 comments from me, but I just couldn’t stop reading. I cried so much, I used to many tissues. So many things touched me deeply.
Charlie‘s death was the worst part for me, I actually am still crying.
Emmett holding Bella, not letting her go after she asked him? Jasper wiping the blood from her human face? These touched me incredibly deep. Bella had the supportive family that so many of us wish we had.

I am glad she had so much support. Thank you for giving me the chance to experience all of that through Bella‘s eyes.

What an amazing story! Thank you so much for writing this, I've loved reading every chapter! The characters all feel so true to cannon, but I love the bit if extra ferocity and darkness you've let Edward show ️.