Reviews for Vicissitude
oritenten chapter 65 . 11/16/2020
THIS IS PRECIOUSSS oh my god thank you so much for existing and writing such lovely stories! all those years studying english really paid off at the moment i read this. for real. thanks!
shineshen chapter 65 . 9/16/2020
wow i love this
stronger13 chapter 58 . 4/29/2020
Awwwww. Huhu. And I thought Neji was alive in this story. But then, he left Tenten a son. Unlike in canon. Anyway, thank you!
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 66 . 1/30/2020
Haha, neji is checking tenten out. Again, another idea that usually doesn’t happen and and when it does, it is usually the opposite around. Tenten is not so oblivious to him doing so then
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 65 . 1/30/2020
This was such a unique and cool idea.
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 64 . 1/30/2020
Ssooo, is there a second date? Wow, tenten sure has balls to tell neji this was one of the worst dates she ever been on. Like how you included the ex boyfriend, a bit of a twist really
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 63 . 1/30/2020
Who knew neji could be so straightforward in asking for a date
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 62 . 1/30/2020
“Im scouting the enemy”, I love that line. Was so appropriate for the situation but I wouldn’t thought about using it. Love how something simple as beating someone to their favourite seat could lead to a relationship/friendship possibly budding
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 61 . 1/30/2020
You hit me at a weak spot. Even though coffee house stories are such cliches, I absolutely love them. Probably because I’m a coffee junkie myself. Love, love, love this one shot. Hope you decide to do that follow up!
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 60 . 1/30/2020
Really cute one shot. Loved the rain and nejiten so this was awesome!
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 59 . 1/30/2020
As much as I love nejiten, it’s not really a far fetch idea that tenten likes Lee in the series, they do sometimes argue like a couple. Surprise that you got Lee to marry Hinata in the end, don’t think I see that coming. Like the ending when it was revealed that neji was waiting till Lee was not available to kiss her
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 58 . 1/30/2020
Dammit, when she just randomly asked that question with no sadness or remorse whatsoever, really thought neji was alive. Though it’s not so much a sad story, it’s kinda heartbreaking that neji asks tenten whether they still be together after the war, and him dying like that. Such a shame that he never saw his daughter.
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 57 . 1/30/2020
It’s kinda weird reading this cause a lot of your oneshots in this collection has been based on the series haha. Really enjoyed this one. A fan of your long one shots, they’re always a great read. Can see neji really being a attorney, the job suits him
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 56 . 1/29/2020
I loved how Tenten described him as a person. It was the perfect thing to say to him after those asshole elders verdicts. When situations gets passionate, it’s usually fun to read haha but I really enjoyed this change where the boy or girl doesn’t give into temptation. I really love how a lot of your stories don’t involve neji and tenten jumping into a relationship and taking things too fast cause let’s be honest, most real love stories don’t happen like that haha
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 55 . 1/29/2020
I like how this turned out. How it went from being a romantic scene with a wife/husband or girlfriend/boyfriend to Neji wanting to correct what’s wrong about tradition
585 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »