Reviews for Vicissitude
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 66 . 1/30
Haha, neji is checking tenten out. Again, another idea that usually doesn’t happen and and when it does, it is usually the opposite around. Tenten is not so oblivious to him doing so then
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 65 . 1/30
This was such a unique and cool idea.
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 64 . 1/30
Ssooo, is there a second date? Wow, tenten sure has balls to tell neji this was one of the worst dates she ever been on. Like how you included the ex boyfriend, a bit of a twist really
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 63 . 1/30
Who knew neji could be so straightforward in asking for a date
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 62 . 1/30
“Im scouting the enemy”, I love that line. Was so appropriate for the situation but I wouldn’t thought about using it. Love how something simple as beating someone to their favourite seat could lead to a relationship/friendship possibly budding
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 61 . 1/30
You hit me at a weak spot. Even though coffee house stories are such cliches, I absolutely love them. Probably because I’m a coffee junkie myself. Love, love, love this one shot. Hope you decide to do that follow up!
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 60 . 1/30
Really cute one shot. Loved the rain and nejiten so this was awesome!
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 59 . 1/30
As much as I love nejiten, it’s not really a far fetch idea that tenten likes Lee in the series, they do sometimes argue like a couple. Surprise that you got Lee to marry Hinata in the end, don’t think I see that coming. Like the ending when it was revealed that neji was waiting till Lee was not available to kiss her
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 58 . 1/30
Dammit, when she just randomly asked that question with no sadness or remorse whatsoever, really thought neji was alive. Though it’s not so much a sad story, it’s kinda heartbreaking that neji asks tenten whether they still be together after the war, and him dying like that. Such a shame that he never saw his daughter.
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 57 . 1/30
It’s kinda weird reading this cause a lot of your oneshots in this collection has been based on the series haha. Really enjoyed this one. A fan of your long one shots, they’re always a great read. Can see neji really being a attorney, the job suits him
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 56 . 1/29
I loved how Tenten described him as a person. It was the perfect thing to say to him after those asshole elders verdicts. When situations gets passionate, it’s usually fun to read haha but I really enjoyed this change where the boy or girl doesn’t give into temptation. I really love how a lot of your stories don’t involve neji and tenten jumping into a relationship and taking things too fast cause let’s be honest, most real love stories don’t happen like that haha
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 55 . 1/29
I like how this turned out. How it went from being a romantic scene with a wife/husband or girlfriend/boyfriend to Neji wanting to correct what’s wrong about tradition
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 54 . 1/29
I like how the whole feeling of the one shot is very serene. Despite the death of Tsunade, her emotions weren’t overly done. I just really like how your one shot reflects the tranquility of the rain
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 53 . 1/29
Your warning was greatly appreciated. You did a good job making me tear up, especially after the comment about finding each other in the after life
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 52 . 1/29
So that why she had to cut her hair. Before, she said she no longer feel like a girl, guess it was needed. Can really see the fire daimyo doing this. I find him really annoying in the series. It’s a good thing neji got her out of there.
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