|Reviews for Vicissitude|
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 36 . 1/29
I usually don’t like these style of writing but I genuinely enjoyed reading this one. Loved how you described her eyes. Most others would just say they’re brown and that’s just boring
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 35 . 1/29
How long would it be before they figure how it’s love? The whole tenten getting injured and hospital incident was really well written. Enjoyed it
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 34 . 1/29
Awww. That’s horrible what happened to tenten. It’s a shame that she doesn’t want to get married but I do understand her reasons though. Do feel bad for neji who does want to but cannot face the rejection. It’s kinda a complicated situation they are in
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 33 . 1/29
I remember this now. Took me a long time. Was from the scene that tenten caught them and became upset. It’s nice to read what really happened
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 32 . 1/29
Lee likes tenten? As much as I love nejiten, I was feeling sad towards Lee cause it was kinda cruel to do that to a friend when he knows he likes her. The story is like its title though, hot haha
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 31 . 1/29
I love this. It’s so simple but don’t think is done enough if at all. Really feel this good a full chapter story but it works well as a drabble as well. Curious on how they got captured in the first place?
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 30 . 1/29
At first, I thought that you’re going to follow through with the series and have neji killed. Then tenten would grieve for him, thinking why she didn’t say yes in the first place haha.
Your way is really good though cause they get the happy ending they deserve. Wishing this actually happened in the series
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 29 . 1/29
A lot of drama at the end. Curious what tenten did. Must really be something to make neji that mad
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 28 . 1/29
yay! They got married. Can’t help but think how gross it is, that neji just kissed her when she just threw up haha.
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 27 . 1/29
Wow, they sure move quick. Moving in together before dating. Course neji’s such a sucker for her he’ll say yes. Really sweet story
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 26 . 1/29
So will tenten be able to return to being a Kunoichi or is it all over?
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 25 . 1/29
Well, neji is the one who kissed her so it’s not her fault haha. Love it!
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 24 . 1/29
I like the ending. Understand why tenten’s upset, but it’s also hard for neji not having any breaks . Too bad they don’t have any phones during their time, would make contact a whole lot easier
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 23 . 1/28
Dont think I’ve ever read this style of writing from you before. Though it’s usually not for me (this style), it’s good that you’re trying something new and you’re proud of it
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 22 . 1/28
"You can't judge the sprinkles before they judge you" that had me cracking up. Love this. Seems like a lot of people view tenten as a bad cook/baker from the amount of fics I read. The ending was saucy haha