Reviews for Vicissitude
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 24 . 1/29/2020
I like the ending. Understand why tenten’s upset, but it’s also hard for neji not having any breaks . Too bad they don’t have any phones during their time, would make contact a whole lot easier
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 23 . 1/28/2020
Dont think I’ve ever read this style of writing from you before. Though it’s usually not for me (this style), it’s good that you’re trying something new and you’re proud of it
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 22 . 1/28/2020
"You can't judge the sprinkles before they judge you" that had me cracking up. Love this. Seems like a lot of people view tenten as a bad cook/baker from the amount of fics I read. The ending was saucy haha
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 21 . 1/28/2020
WoW, never once thought that Lee would say something like that
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 20 . 1/28/2020
Cute and simple. Don’t think I read ‘wrong’ just yet
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 19 . 1/28/2020
Wait, what is it? The tattoo! I’m curious to why Neji’s laughing, oh so rarely
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 18 . 1/28/2020
I’ve read so much of your stories so far so I’m trying to remember if I’ve read ‘fighter’ haha
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 17 . 1/28/2020
Have to remind myself to read your story ‘proofing’. Both the children don’t sound like resemble neji or tenten are all haha. Love the little Naruto comment and neji being jealous over it
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 16 . 1/28/2020
Awww. So they got together at the age of twenty three. Agree with Tenten, personalised handmade gifts are always the way to go. Love it!
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 15 . 1/28/2020
As much as I love Lee, never thought he was smarter than neji haha. Originally thought that the team breaking up was the reason behind her cold personality.
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 14 . 1/28/2020
Why? Why did neji say that to her? Was it Hiashi? Based on what I read in your other fics haha
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 13 . 1/28/2020
Never once thought to ask someone to "promise they won’t miss me". Tenten’s right, that really is impossible if you’re close with them. Sweet sweet one shot
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 12 . 1/28/2020
Love love love this! I like how in your stories, well most, Neji is quick to admit he has feelings for Tenten and this was just really sweet. Loved the whole captain and subordinate forbidden relationship. Loved the ending two, when their teammates betted on them
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 11 . 1/23/2020
Neji can’t dance? Usually it’s the other way round in other fanfics haha
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 10 . 1/23/2020
I knew this was Mama Mia straight away. Love that movie! Probably cause I’m a big ABBA fan
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