This was beautiful. I love all the characters and the name changes and how I can just imagine how beautiful the village is! You have done a wonderful job!

Dora is supposed to be powerful but it seems he’s a fucking pansy chump. They have already stated that the graveyard had many children in it so WHY THE FUCK ARENT THEY DOING MORE TO PROTECT THEM? Oh right, anyone with half a brain WOULD so the writer is forcing this stupid bullshit for added fake drama. Stupid writers should have their hands removed.

Um. Well. I bet you've improved a TON since you wrote this, younger male person. It was a long time ago. No more emo protagonists with red and black hair for you, right? (They don't have "The Cure" in Konoha, that I know of, although I hope Orochimaru would appreciate the humour in "Lullaby".)

This is a confusing story he was banished from Konoha but yet he's now forgiving them I mean WTF, this story is interesting but it seems he's forgiven them too quickly and he's become soft in a way, what was up with that guy resting on Naruto that was kind of gay there, I mean no offense just my opinion.

I am liking this story but I expected there to be more hate but he's already forming an alliance with Konoha makes no sense, although I will continue to read it.

Well, this was surprising well not the council and Danzo they're all retards, why would Kankuro go there though so many storage things seem Temari also doesn't like people disrespecting Naruto, I wonder what happens next chapter.

Well, I must say quite interesting first Shikamaru, Neji and Shino leave the village quite a surprise that Sasuke is back in Konoha when exactly did he return it's confusing, I wonder where Akamaru was, and Gaara's in contact with Naruto interesting.

Well, I must say interesting concept, I can't wait for more.

This was a fitting end. But who is Naruto’s daughter’s mother?
Not Tsunade, right?
Good job with the fic. May your journey after this be good.

This is an interesting fic start.

I loved it!

Your not going to say anything about hinata even though she told him she loved him?

I always come back to your stories when I'm out of things to read. You did such a good job with this one and I hope that you'll write another Naruto book in the future.

I have always enjoyed this story ever since I originally found it and even now when I reread it for the umpteenth time. I usually am hit with the urge to reread it and then have to try to find it all over again. It is always well worth the searching.

the third would be 87 if he's still alive. how are his teammates still on the council?