Reviews for Rewriting History |
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![]() ![]() Ůžasna povídka děkuju |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you portray the "darker" characters. I already love Lucius and Severus and even Bellatrix. The way you show them as actual people with motivations behind why they do things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. Didn't go where I was expecting, and that's not a bad thing. Off to read the sequel. thanks for the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it. i enjoy your writing style |
![]() ![]() ![]() im crying this chapter is perfect. i love how you make astus had a interaction with the evans. and the way he handles petunia's situation, got me teary that was beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mid way through the chapter it felt like this: Abraxas: Honey, I'm home. Astus: We now have a daughter. Congratulations darling. This was a really great chapter, this feels like so much could change just from this small move |
![]() ![]() ![]() How do you say Astus? 'Cause it sounds like ass-tus V convenient that he got there as Eileen was killed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is super awesome. Loved the story line. Just too much sleeping going on in it. Feels like Astus spends most of the story sleeping. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is good, but it has too much of sleep in it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() would be great if tiro make another fanfic that’s connected to this one but with harry and voldemort being buddy buddy |
![]() ![]() Astus has the knowledge to stop 2 wars. I hope he at least give that knowledge to someone else if he doesn't want to fight anymore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() meee§msm§mßmdm .!oo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a Spade casually dropping by again ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oops, wrong word here ("Blackmailing?" the headmaster said, amused.) The right word would be bribery. |