I love how Astus handled the two groups of students.

I still dont understand why did Eileen suddenly died. It’s alright if she died if Tobias was shocked by Harry appearing so he accidentally pulled the trigger, but Tobias not noticing and just shooting is simply another [I’m the author so I just do what I want.] It’s just ridiculous.

Why would Harry conveniently appear and just take in Severus because Eileen so conveniently died? If his appearance did not affect this incident, it simply means Eileen died in the previous timeline, which makes no sense.

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I love how you portray the "darker" characters. I already love Lucius and Severus and even Bellatrix. The way you show them as actual people with motivations behind why they do things.

Good story. Didn't go where I was expecting, and that's not a bad thing. Off to read the sequel. thanks for the story.

i like it. i enjoy your writing style

im crying this chapter is perfect. i love how you make astus had a interaction with the evans. and the way he handles petunia's situation, got me teary that was beautiful

Mid way through the chapter it felt like this:
Abraxas: Honey, I'm home.
Astus: We now have a daughter. Congratulations darling.

This was a really great chapter, this feels like so much could change just from this small move

How do you say Astus? 'Cause it sounds like ass-tus

V convenient that he got there as Eileen was killed.

Great start!

This story is super awesome. Loved the story line. Just too much sleeping going on in it. Feels like Astus spends most of the story sleeping.

The story is good, but it has too much of sleep in it.

would be great if tiro make another fanfic that’s connected to this one but with harry and voldemort being buddy buddy

Astus has the knowledge to stop 2 wars. I hope he at least give that knowledge to someone else if he doesn't want to fight anymore.

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