Reviews for Rewriting History |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i like it. i enjoy your writing style |
![]() ![]() ![]() im crying this chapter is perfect. i love how you make astus had a interaction with the evans. and the way he handles petunia's situation, got me teary that was beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mid way through the chapter it felt like this: Abraxas: Honey, I'm home. Astus: We now have a daughter. Congratulations darling. This was a really great chapter, this feels like so much could change just from this small move |
![]() ![]() ![]() How do you say Astus? 'Cause it sounds like ass-tus V convenient that he got there as Eileen was killed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is super awesome. Loved the story line. Just too much sleeping going on in it. Feels like Astus spends most of the story sleeping. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is good, but it has too much of sleep in it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() would be great if tiro make another fanfic that’s connected to this one but with harry and voldemort being buddy buddy |
![]() ![]() Astus has the knowledge to stop 2 wars. I hope he at least give that knowledge to someone else if he doesn't want to fight anymore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() meee§msm§mßmdm .!oo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a Spade casually dropping by again ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oops, wrong word here ("Blackmailing?" the headmaster said, amused.) The right word would be bribery. |
![]() ![]() Hello there Tiro I like them both, they are slowly being built. I like new Harry and Severus. I enjoyed how Harry acted around Lestrange's trying to bully him a bit. I was a bit surprised when you did not develop much more the interactions between the class and the different teachers, or the subjects he chose at sixth year, but that's okay. I was wondering if you could place asterisks between each different scene, just so readers know the scene changes. I found that a bit confusing, but rereading it I managed to understand what had happened. Thanks for uploading such story. Cheers. DS. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still not sure if i like it or not. It’s definitely getting 1st place if there is ever a competition about a fic having lots of sleep in it. Feels like over 50% of the story so far ppl either sleep or rest or talk about sleep/rest. |
![]() ![]() Pocas veces lloro con los fics. Pero esta escena de Sirius...me rompió el corazón ...llore mucho. Quedó excelente México agosto 2020 |