Reviews for Rewriting History
Ravenclaw-Slytherin-Erudite chapter 3 . 10/12
Lucius should only be 7 at this point. When Severus was a first year Lucius was a prefect which would make him 4 years older. Really enjoying the story so far!
Rika100 chapter 25 . 8/7
Awesome story, unexpected ending. One of the reasons I enjoy your stories, you always surprise me and through it all it's a rollercoaster of emotions and angst. One moment I'm laughing and the next my throat closed up in a knot. Now to read the sequel. :) :) :)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/25
House elves?
Guest chapter 3 . 7/25
Do people not bother to knock before arbitrarily entering "Astus'" rooms? I mean, it sounds like people just troop in and out of "his" rooms whenever they want and don't bother knocking, asking permission, nothing. It's kind of creepy, lol.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/25
I'm liking this story so far but why are the chapters so short?
WeisseHex chapter 3 . 7/18
Would that we REALLY could start over, like Harry Potter! At least I would. There are always things that could use being changed or never allowed to happen.
Harry is doing it!
mydarkprincess chapter 10 . 7/10
zero Xanadu, xerox Xanadu. ,,,,,,,,c, xerox, ,,,,
Azure Shine chapter 6 . 6/15
sad chapter but so funny! oh harry so unlucky. sorry I laughed. hehe
Azure Shine chapter 1 . 6/15
oh! forget my review in chapter 4, i am misunderstand. sorry
Azure Shine chapter 4 . 6/15
for chapter 3why he tell people about not celebrate his birthday? isnt he in diguise? how about mantis family is kind before? it like he insult death people.
Azure Shine chapter 3 . 6/15
you haven't lived comfortable life, have you?

harry is live in dursley I know but isnt he in hogwart too?
Azure Shine chapter 3 . 6/15
harry is sixth year im hogwart and severus father?! how?!
What is a nam chapter 26 . 5/24


Words can't describe how much I love it.
Human Heart chapter 22 . 5/5
Reaaaaaaally not likeing Moody
Human Heart chapter 21 . 5/5
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