Lucius should only be 7 at this point. When Severus was a first year Lucius was a prefect which would make him 4 years older. Really enjoying the story so far!

Awesome story, unexpected ending. One of the reasons I enjoy your stories, you always surprise me and through it all it's a rollercoaster of emotions and angst. One moment I'm laughing and the next my throat closed up in a knot. Now to read the sequel. :) :) :)

House elves?

Do people not bother to knock before arbitrarily entering "Astus'" rooms? I mean, it sounds like people just troop in and out of "his" rooms whenever they want and don't bother knocking, asking permission, nothing. It's kind of creepy, lol.

I'm liking this story so far but why are the chapters so short?

Would that we REALLY could start over, like Harry Potter! At least I would. There are always things that could use being changed or never allowed to happen.
Harry is doing it!

zero Xanadu, xerox Xanadu. ,,,,,,,,c, xerox, ,,,,

sad chapter but so funny! oh harry so unlucky. sorry I laughed. hehe

oh! forget my review in chapter 4, i am misunderstand. sorry

for chapter 3why he tell people about not celebrate his birthday? isnt he in diguise? how about mantis family is kind before? it like he insult death people.

you haven't lived comfortable life, have you?

harry is live in dursley I know but isnt he in hogwart too?

harry is sixth year im hogwart and severus father?! how?!

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Story

Words can't describe how much I love it.

Reaaaaaaally not likeing Moody

Awwww