|Reviews for The Meadow|
| s0ulmatch3r chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
AAAAHHHHH OMG THE FEELS
| trishna8waheng chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
i totally love the way she confesses her love for him.. "i wake up,screaming for you"? fuck i lost my mind and my breath at this line! hotttttt. u are awesome at these really hot hard to handle stuff! love u!
| devilstwin6969 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Verrrryyyy hot xD
Really good writing ]
| DofD chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
| yukixzerovk chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Awww. So cute! Makes me want to cry tears of joy!
| josie chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
that WAS a bit too much-Yuuki may be outgoing, but not THAT much
| Mouzif chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Well, that was... ermm...
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
| SonjaInSomnium chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
All I can say is...: Wow. Beautiful.
see, THAT'S what sex should be! Not how media portrays it. Good on you for writing such an amazing piece!
| Hand Over the Bishies chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
just enough. :D
another great oneshot
| Avalon chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Mahvelous dahling, mahvelous.
One of the most "IC" "OC" fanfiction short stories I have read as of yet. I've also taken the pleasure of reading a few of your other pieces involving this fiery little coupling and I must say - it was exhilarating ;)
But putting hormones aside, it was eloquent to say the least, and captivating in its best moments. Although some of the diction had me pausing and re-reading a couple sentences, it was overall an 8.9 out of 10 on my scale.
Thank you for writing. And by all means - don't quit!
| Caroline Berlin chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Did Zero eat Shakespeare? Because some of his lines are just so oddly structured, I swear they came out of Shakespeare.
| some one u dont kno chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
the u write ur stories...its beautiful.
god i think i jus wet myself *O*
wow yuki has become a very perverted woman..lol
plz more i beggin u!
(i hav nothing else to do...jk)
| GinaLovesZero chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
That was HAWT! Loved it!
| Lass Cherrie chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
You. Are. God.
Well. The Goddess of Zero/Yuki lemon fics, anyway.
CMB (too lazy to write full name), this was absolutely breathtaking. I adored it. Your setting, description, characterisation (admittedly, it's extremely difficult writing IC when you're putting them in a sitatuion that would never happen in the acutal Manga/Anime) and flow were brilliant. The reader was sucked in, every sight, sound and touch as realistic to the audience as the keys of this keyboard are under my fingertips
Although I find oral favours completely abhorrent (just not an advocate for it), I was able to swallow my temporary displeasure with Yuki in order to be enthralled with the rest of it. You did a magnificent job :)
But I must say... What was with the Shakespearean tongue? Seriously, Yuki and Zero turned SO classic-Shakespearean-romance for a while there, they sounded almost comical, even though it was the most floral, passionate speech
"You know not what you do."
"I dare not speak of it."
I felt like these two sentences needed exclamation marks, accompanied by Zero sweeping his hand over his forehead and lounging on a balcony under the moon, dressed in 17th century Messina-style attire! He could have stepped straight out of Romeo & Juliet! XD
But I loved it. Kooky, old-school romantic speech included.
It was just great