Reviews for Naruto: Whirlpool Chronicles
Spencer Chamberlain chapter 42 . 4/18
greart ending, altrought i ask myself if this story will have a sequel as a crossover with a modern dey anime.

anyway see ya!
doodle chapter 1 . 2/20
Stupid Civilian Councils... Good Kyuubi... This is a start of a good story... though I still want to kill the councilors...
gleamfang chapter 7 . 2/17
I'm loving the love/hate relationship right now and the internal dialogue is quite funny though rather typical "schoolgirl" and all that but it's fluff and I like it so there!

I really like your Jutsu ideas but just one thing about the Itachi and Kisame fight. With their techniques being long ranged and all, don't you think Naruto and Yugito would have realized that opponents would figure out to dodge the incoming ballistic projectiles of death the second it comes flying towards them? I mean they completely wasted their damn chakra throwing three of those monsters at Itachi and Kisame with little to no distraction with the only one with real surprise value being the one that Yugito aimed at Itachi.
That being said, I get that they were still a little green with their new techniques and probably hasn't worked out gambits and tactics to use their moves efficiently but that was just something that bothered me a little.
Regardless I love your character interactions and the weapons seem really cool but I was hoping for a little more explanation on Yugito's weapon. Maybe I'll get yet later's hoping!

Keep Writing
Guest chapter 42 . 2/7
Mind. Blown. I thought that it was just a dude who looked like naruto and yugito but maybe...
Guest chapter 36 . 2/7
Izanagi and Izanami make sense if you know what they mean. Amaterasu, Tsukuyomi and Susanoo are the three major shinto deitys and if you know the myths, Izanagi and Izanami are their parents. Well, more only Izanagi, but who cares?
Rebmul chapter 42 . 2/8
brilliant bloody brilliant
elizarocks9902 chapter 23 . 1/22
I would love to read a Naruto fic when he has the rennigan and ends up with Yugito! Please make it!
Chow for now! Peace:)
Guest chapter 18 . 1/16
omg the great answer to end the circle of hatred is to end the ninka system? hahaha how stupids that? as if ppl need chakra to kill each other O.o
otherwise its a nice story well written and all
armahgeddon chapter 19 . 1/16
ups anopnymous poster was me didnt see that i wasnt logged in sry
andres-kun chapter 42 . 1/5
te lo digo en serio me a gustado mucho, te a quedado bien el final para ser corto. Espero que sigas haciendo mas historias como estas
Mistress Lady Malfoy-Potter chapter 1 . 1/6
Guest chapter 24 . 12/31/2013
TnnSTyAchSTheDoctor chapter 42 . 11/30/2013
needs a present day sequel maybe make it a crossover of some sort anyways great read
Guest chapter 5 . 11/23/2013
Sannin is better than kage stupid, not the other way around!
MC rY-No chapter 18 . 11/14/2013
Wow...i rely enjoy ur fiction kip da gud wrk...
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