It's feels like I'm reading a game quest rather than a fanfiction

nmmmn

Damn Forge! Why do you have to give tge split lip a beautiful sight before it died?

when Nartuo had took his mom and dad moeny and scrolls and others stuff with him and he had move to the whrilpool and get time to made a new home into the under gound caves he new home and time he reading the scrolls and geting the muslces too he workings it nights on body huther took out s class and mins men and women like made more moeny form it too, even the lands of winds he took out a evil city savers men and women who rulers of it get took out the moeny and art he find he took with him , slavers fomr it had join help with him , one rich men he took out had the whrilpool scrolls and art form it naruto had his cut off head now and put on the west wall with his women 1 officer head , he then sell of her clothers and others men he took out now, he was home now , workings on the vaillge now he name it of his mom name now, he then had offices /men cave / art room when he situng into it now, the council he made haf no power here , with him as Daimyo he had the saying now , keeping his home to the east part now a towner home now , death masks on the wall now and a big black ring on his head now , fox aromer he had on him now and twin swords now he had uesd into battle is on the wall now, his army of ninjas and bouny huthers now ,

Tsunade is the sole military dictator of the village. She should've just killed everyone in that room. Why is she such a doormat to a bunch of random useless old advisors?

why not let Naurto mix and be the new fox with the new Kitsune fox his powers unime and his 9 tias too and a as for the cat host she is the same way now , and both made a new vaillge into the lands of the whrilpool lands and with it Naurto marring her 1 then killer bee own stundt of the swrod she now body gund and cap now and abut black ops too, and 2 wife , with time the 3 rulers now, if it was me help suske big brother fake his death now, had in the cut head band in then the nickers too, his now living in the west now, under the name Robert Leory ford , his runing a vaillge of exils now, like Naurto had in the whrilpool , as for sarkura she had be a slave and pow of war and had move up to ninja now , she is 3 wife now,

why not let Naruto tell him his was his foremr foe own son and 2 his get took out of his old ninja vaillge and 3 his was trying to set to the whrilpool soon too, as for his god mother and god father i well be mad had a need to get even soon too, and why not let Naurto get his mom and dad moeny too and scrolls too and old famly pics too, and team pics too , and both ninjas head bands and old ninjas vests and his dad own jackte too,

Why tf would he decline getting stronger just for answers wtf

The timeline is very confusing. As well as... The entirety of what just happened besides the fight.

Cool So he is not banished he is now a missing ninja now and still part of the village. Cause if he was exiled means he is nothing to him and is now considered a enemy ninja and would be attacked if found within their borders. At least if his considered MIA, he can be captured.

Interesting 1st chapter.

This whole tournament arc seems a but bs and unnecessary to me but meh wtv

Bene bene un inizio col botto e guai a non finire!

Great story overall and glad to have read it. the ending was pretty good as well especially the part about wondering if they were immortal or not but if they are did they have more kids again at a later time or no.

This sucks so bad Naruto still a bitch

There is a damn big mistake here. Inari just started to train 3 days ago and somehow naruto taught him the Shadow Clone Jutsu (Kage Bushin No Justu) that just a no no. The jutsu is KinjutsuForbidden Jutsu) and only Ninjas with Jonin level Chakra can use it.