Sucks so bad

great story

You need to have better explanations on why things happen. You’re setting it up so that the reader has to fill in the gaps and make stuff up that can confuse them even more later on. Good idea for a story and set up well you just need to connect the dots between each moment better.

when you use western names like eric it really ruins the story

yo that was really good

Nope Nope Nope ... you were doing soooooo well and then you had him go to pein and Konoha? nope sorry but i can't read this any longer because i'm allergic to trash. thanks!

great story. kudos

i love the new change naruto being strong and let the atkasuki be friendly and let naruto with yugitini get to whirlpool country

God Red, you are the only author for this fandom who never let me down. I finally went back and red your old NaruYugi I had in my backlog and I was not disappointed. You are the best of this fandom, and to date have written the best Naruto and Erza fic ever. Hope you're still around, and enjoying your writing. I tried to learn from this story in terms of writing fight scenes, and I hope to take what I learned and make my own stories better. Stay awesome, friend.

Tobi it it a good boy

Nice story. Liked NarutoXYugito pairing. Keep up the great work and good luck for your future works.

That was one the best stories i have read. Great detail interesting plot lines and twist. Thankyou for making a yugito and naruto pairing like that.

I Had to tears in the eyes.

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Great story.