Reviews for Untold
Wishing Rose chapter 3 . 8/10/2010
Wishing Rose chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
aaawwww...this is sad :'( Good job though!
Death-by-Vampire chapter 3 . 4/8/2010
this is a sivearly awesome story!
Running Anna chapter 3 . 3/18/2010
Wow! When I wade through stories on this site, I rarely expect to find writing of this quality, especially related to a children's series. I know there is some very well written stuff around here, but much more that is just...not. You've done really well with this.
arin chapter 3 . 1/24/2010
Cute stories. Very melancholy, angsty theme to them. I'd like to see the tone change with the next one, perhaps something a little more hopeful/optimistic? :)
Brianna chapter 3 . 10/21/2009
Red Productions chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
*sobbs and holds on to jen* I wish she didnt die TT
Kira chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Great story! You should definetaly keep it going and add more chapters. The chapter is a little short though.

fantasyessa chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
I think this story has real potenyial and i think I'm going to start reading it... Update soon and I definatley will, I'll review every chapter! But please check my profile... I want as many hits as I can get! PLEASE!