Reviews for Whirlwind Chronicles
ninjarox chapter 3 . 11/6/2011
Awesome story! Please update soon aswell as btj:iti (decode that ;P) ~ninjarox
The Sand Alchemist chapter 3 . 4/16/2011
So gaara's truning into a bijuu? NOOO! and i love this story!
Shippuuryu chapter 3 . 3/31/2011
nice
Chewie Cookies chapter 3 . 10/4/2010
Awesome! 1 small translation problem, though. "Barrier", which you spelled "Kekki", is actually "Kekkai". And the "Kekki" in "Bloodline Limit" is actually "Kekkei", making the full term "Kekkei Genkai".

Keep up the good work!
Chewie Cookies chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Awesome! Melikey da fluff!
redhrard chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
excellent chapter, keep up the great work!
gaby chapter 3 . 4/30/2010
great

Will you Update Bending the Jutsu:Into the inferno soon?

I will also like to see Hope for a New Republic get a update.
jocelyn chapter 3 . 3/9/2010
wonderful story, I LOVE how all the good youngsters are stronger than in canon. Nice job with Shukaku, I forgot that that should have happened.
georgeofthecity chapter 3 . 2/25/2010
excellent story, great fight scenes, I like the new political developments, and how all the good guys are stronger, nice work with Shukaku, it doesn't make sense why he didn't appear in canon.
HI chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
DUDE UPDATE THE STORY
ficgenie chapter 3 . 2/6/2010
wonderful story, I loved the shukaku part
DBZLOVER chapter 3 . 2/5/2010
great chapters, excellent fight scenes, I like the bit with Shukaku
DBZLOVER chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
great story, I like how strong they are
RK-Striker-JK-5 chapter 3 . 2/2/2010
Ooh, I LOVE Shukaku transforming like that. Makes sense, too. He's unconscious!

Good grasp of the characters. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Zach chapter 3 . 2/1/2010
Nicely done. It'll be nice to see how they deal with Shukaku. Also, nice touches with Temari and Shikamaru, given I like those two together quite a bit. I felt Kankuro maybe put up a bit too much a fight, but overall, well done.
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