|Reviews for Blood and Lust|
| abronzeflame chapter 4 . 7/22/2009
Do not under any circimstances apologise for any melodramatics. You deserve each and every review you get and you should have so many more. This is unbelieveably hot.
I am getting so very bothered reading this. Your words are poetic porn. I've read a few stories with a similar premise to your's but nothing holds a candle to this.
Your dialogue as I said is so fuckhot. And Edward's internal monologue is hilarious. I thank you for taking the time to write this. Just fucking awesome and I can't wait to continue reading... so that's what I'm off to do now.
| MsTipene chapter 7 . 7/19/2009
Awesome... I can put this and Breaking dawn so easy and cant wait for the next chapter. Love the adult content :)
Keep up with the good work!
| BeautifulBrkdwn chapter 7 . 7/16/2009
Let me take a moment to fangirl all over Edward's SPARKLY PARTS...okay. I'm done now.
Okay...so canon...I'm okay with this...sort of always wanted BD from Edward's POV. All angst ridden and such. But, I'm a sucker for some angst. Don't really like preggo Bella but it's canon so I can deal...as long as it isn't from her POV. I'm not a BD hater...I just sort of wished we could skip over the whole pregnant thing...*grumble*plot device renesmee*grumble*.
I'm still in love with this story! Update soon, please :D
| michswan chapter 7 . 7/16/2009
I'll admit, BD was not my favorite by any means. But I am looking forward to see where you take this. Thanks for the update - can't wait for more! :)
| michswan chapter 6 . 7/16/2009
Yea Edward! So good...
| michswan chapter 5 . 7/16/2009
That was awesome! Your version makes so much more sense at his freak-out the next morning...
| michswan chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
I *LOVE* his inner dialogue. It cracks me up. Dang, is it hot in here?
| michswan chapter 3 . 7/16/2009
Holy Hot Pockets...
| michswan chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
Wow, that was the hottest mutual self-love session I've ever read...
| michswan chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
I love your characterization of Edward. I heard about your story when psymom pimped you up on the Twigasm podcast.
| BeautifulBrkdwn chapter 5 . 7/16/2009
WOAH! Edward has such rash ideas...silly Edward. Always knew there was more to all that pillow biting than the simple throes of passion. My favorite thing about this chapter though?
"I had broken through her maidenhead."
That is the most eloquent euphemism for freaking cherry popping I have ever heard. Awesome lol. Leave it to Edward to come up with something like this and at the same time using phrases like "hungry cunt". He's such a contradiction. I love it. Oh, and the imagery of Edward busting through a window, bloodlusting is so nice. So very nice.
Oh...reading right along...
| Jackie chapter 7 . 7/15/2009
This is a fantastic story! I love the combination of HOT lemonade and emotional sweetness. Please please update soon!
| BeautifulBrkdwn chapter 4 . 7/15/2009
DTE DTE DTE! I love Dirty Talking Edward. SO. MUCH. And oh...to have an orgasm so intense that one passes out. This might be the most coveted thing in the universe. Except for maybe Edward. Or said orgasms WITH Edward and all his sparkly parts. *sigh* Bella is such a lucky girl.
I like that the biting has become more about turning her than killing her. That's sort of the scenario I always wanted for the honeymoon in BD...caught up in the throes of passion and OOPS. Bella's turned. So much better than fade to black...and a baby. *grumbles*
THIS IS FABULOUS. Reading more...
| BeautifulBrkdwn chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Oh. My. God. The scene with the sex and the blood and the dying...kind of morbid...but so fuckhot and Edward-like. There's something terribly Gothic about this whole situation. Reminds me of some Wuthering Heights action. Such a Byronic hero. I love me some Darkward...especially one who's all cold feet about the sex.
Also, Edward's bloodlust is probably my favorite thing in fic to be personified. When authors give Bella's blood that extra force to be reckoned with. It makes Edward's perseverance that much stronger. It's that sort of barrier that he passes to prove his love for Bella.
This is god. On to Chapter Two for me!
| joayla chapter 7 . 7/13/2009
cant wait till the next chapter hope you are going to update soon
i am pleased you are staying faithful to BD there are so many stories that have changed the ending it will be nice to hear Edawards side of all that went on !