Reviews for Blood and Lust
dlb2546 chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
WOW! That was amazing! I can't wait to see what Edward feels when he finally hears the baby's thoughts! Are you going to have Jake there? I noticed you didn't have his little part at the wedding and was wondering if you would take that part out then as well. You are such a talented writer. Please update soon! Don't keep us hanging!
BeautifulBrkdwn chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
So. At the beginning of this chapter I was reading and thinking about what I would call Rosalie in this wonderful review...and I came upon something...but I didn't think it would be appropriate because people have feelings about this particular insult...AND THE EDWARD CALLED HER A CUNT FOR ME. *sigh* I just love him...and you for making him say it. I think I've been calling her a cunt since I read BD the first time. This was most exciting.

I love that when Bella and Edward fight, they don't really fight. The argue yes, but no one seems to get loud. It seems to drive the point home that B & E are two very controlled individuals. I also think this is why people are so drawn to UST for them...ANYWAYS. This "fight" was good...very in character. I loved it.

The fact that when Edward thinks about the ballet studio and gets turned on is deliciously disturbing...and that's all I'm going to say or I'm going to get turned on. Damn..the things this story does to me.

Is Jacob going to show up in the next chapter?

Oh! And...I'd be willing to review multiple times if you'd like :D Because I re-read this bitch...and I think about reviewing again...but would that be weird? I don't know...I'm rambling...Update soon! :D
ScorpionsAngel2009 chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
I'm loving it! Please keep writing.
RubyLou chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
Well, I was expecting this story to remain a pure lemon fest but I'm actually really glad you decided to tackle this part of the saga. Edward is so damn tormented in BD - it's nice to see he actually still has his baser instincts in mind as well as his panic over Bella. Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter! xoxoxoxo, RubyLou
shleprock chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
my sister just had a baby yesterday so i'm finding it not to be totally on bella's i love how sweet and loving edward is!look forward to the next update.
abronzeflame chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
This was a really insightful chapter. I enjoyed reading Edward's POV on the events this chapter was based on.

I was not at disappointed by the lack of a lemon in this. This part of BD does not call for or allow for the possibility of one, and I think if one was to be included it would only be for the sake of writing on in. It would have no merit.

You certainly do not have a crap story here at all, and I'm so glad I came across this from Twigasm. I hope all the other listeners check this out.

I can't wait to see where you take the next few chapters of this and how it parallels to BD.

If I may ask, did you enjoy BD? I get the feeling from your AN that you did and would like to make certain of that all the same.
Tohru99 chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
Hopefully this will get more readers. This is an excellent story BTW.
TinaBaby chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
Your story is NOT a crap story..just so happens to be one of my faves thank you very much! XD
jedigirlsc chapter 8 . 7/23/2009
glad to see an update, looking forward to bella's change! thanks for updating!
MindyKnotts chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
looking forward to reading and reviewing your story
abronzeflame chapter 4 . 7/22/2009
Do not under any circimstances apologise for any melodramatics. You deserve each and every review you get and you should have so many more. This is unbelieveably hot.

I am getting so very bothered reading this. Your words are poetic porn. I've read a few stories with a similar premise to your's but nothing holds a candle to this.

Your dialogue as I said is so fuckhot. And Edward's internal monologue is hilarious. I thank you for taking the time to write this. Just fucking awesome and I can't wait to continue reading... so that's what I'm off to do now.
MsTipene chapter 7 . 7/19/2009
Awesome... I can put this and Breaking dawn so easy and cant wait for the next chapter. Love the adult content :)

Keep up with the good work!
BeautifulBrkdwn chapter 7 . 7/16/2009
Let me take a moment to fangirl all over Edward's SPARKLY PARTS...okay. I'm done now. canon...I'm okay with this...sort of always wanted BD from Edward's POV. All angst ridden and such. But, I'm a sucker for some angst. Don't really like preggo Bella but it's canon so I can long as it isn't from her POV. I'm not a BD hater...I just sort of wished we could skip over the whole pregnant thing...*grumble*plot device renesmee*grumble*.

I'm still in love with this story! Update soon, please :D
michswan chapter 7 . 7/16/2009
I'll admit, BD was not my favorite by any means. But I am looking forward to see where you take this. Thanks for the update - can't wait for more! :)
michswan chapter 6 . 7/16/2009
Yea Edward! So good...
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