Reviews for Blood and Lust
michswan chapter 5 . 7/16/2009
That was awesome! Your version makes so much more sense at his freak-out the next morning...
michswan chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
I *LOVE* his inner dialogue. It cracks me up. Dang, is it hot in here?
michswan chapter 3 . 7/16/2009
Holy Hot Pockets...
michswan chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
Wow, that was the hottest mutual self-love session I've ever read...
michswan chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
I love your characterization of Edward. I heard about your story when psymom pimped you up on the Twigasm podcast.
BeautifulBrkdwn chapter 5 . 7/16/2009
WOAH! Edward has such rash ideas...silly Edward. Always knew there was more to all that pillow biting than the simple throes of passion. My favorite thing about this chapter though?

"I had broken through her maidenhead."

That is the most eloquent euphemism for freaking cherry popping I have ever heard. Awesome lol. Leave it to Edward to come up with something like this and at the same time using phrases like "hungry cunt". He's such a contradiction. I love it. Oh, and the imagery of Edward busting through a window, bloodlusting is so nice. So very nice.

Oh...reading right along...
Jackie chapter 7 . 7/15/2009
This is a fantastic story! I love the combination of HOT lemonade and emotional sweetness. Please please update soon!
BeautifulBrkdwn chapter 4 . 7/15/2009
DTE DTE DTE! I love Dirty Talking Edward. SO. MUCH. And have an orgasm so intense that one passes out. This might be the most coveted thing in the universe. Except for maybe Edward. Or said orgasms WITH Edward and all his sparkly parts. *sigh* Bella is such a lucky girl.

I like that the biting has become more about turning her than killing her. That's sort of the scenario I always wanted for the honeymoon in BD...caught up in the throes of passion and OOPS. Bella's turned. So much better than fade to black...and a baby. *grumbles*

THIS IS FABULOUS. Reading more...
BeautifulBrkdwn chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Oh. My. God. The scene with the sex and the blood and the dying...kind of morbid...but so fuckhot and Edward-like. There's something terribly Gothic about this whole situation. Reminds me of some Wuthering Heights action. Such a Byronic hero. I love me some Darkward...especially one who's all cold feet about the sex.

Also, Edward's bloodlust is probably my favorite thing in fic to be personified. When authors give Bella's blood that extra force to be reckoned with. It makes Edward's perseverance that much stronger. It's that sort of barrier that he passes to prove his love for Bella.

This is god. On to Chapter Two for me!
joayla chapter 7 . 7/13/2009
cant wait till the next chapter hope you are going to update soon

i am pleased you are staying faithful to BD there are so many stories that have changed the ending it will be nice to hear Edawards side of all that went on !
x-Eliza-x chapter 4 . 7/12/2009
O so hot hot. Nearly made me pass out to hehe. :)
daphne02 chapter 7 . 7/10/2009
Really loving your story. Staying true to the books but the steamy details have enhanced it so much more. Love it!
Tiffany chapter 7 . 7/10/2009
u have to finish this quickly i love r writing!
kerrwynn chapter 6 . 7/10/2009
I'm SO enjoying this enhancement of the story (details that I imagined privately for myself when I was reading the book out loud to my kids!). Nice work! I particularly like the detail about the blood and his frenzied reaction. Hoping you keep writing! Edward's perspective is fascinating on all this. I've enjoyed reading the unfinished draft of Midnight Sun and this would fit right in with an X-rated version of that!
peny.lane chapter 7 . 7/9/2009
im totally engrossed in your story! keep up the great work and i cant wait for more!
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