Reviews for Blood and Lust
Vamplady123 chapter 21 . 4/29/2012
The last part or at least the last chapter of SMeyer's BD should've been EPOV. So we couldn't read how Edward finally got over his monstery thoughts. Niiiiccce ending
Vamplady123 chapter 14 . 4/28/2012
Thank Gid that this EPOV of BD is different from others. They copy it word for word, so I'm glad you changed certain things. Also, the part where Alice left/vision was much more clearer to me. Maybe because it was in EPOV instead of BPOV, but I get it more now. My only question is why did alice leave? I never got it...
Laura chapter 21 . 4/28/2012
I loved seeing this story from Edward's point of view. (Not to mention the scrumptious sex scenes that were denied us to keep the teen rating!) LOVED IT! If I smoked I would be enjoying a few right now! Thank you!
Cath chapter 4 . 4/12/2012
Really, really great. best one I have read!x
Fliberty chapter 21 . 4/8/2012
I enjoyed reading this.

It's a long time since I read Breaking Dawn so I'd forgotten some of the subtleties and I enjoyed re-experiencing them from Edward's POV.

I liked the way you kept Edward's voice close to canon but made his internal voice so much closer to what the average guy was likely to be thinking, complete with a temper and plenty of swearing.

The heat between Edward and Bella was impressive. Not to mention enjoyable ;-)

I enjoyed the lemons but also the little insights you added into Edward to a story we already know so well. I particularly enjoyed seeing the Volturi face off from Edward's perspective. I'd forgotten how desperate I was to know what Aro and Caius were thinking when I first read the book.

Thanks for sharing this x
A penny short chapter 21 . 3/28/2012
Thank you so much for giving us some more Breaking Dawn Edward. I've always felt Edward was pushed into the background too much in BD and he deserved more. Lemons were delicious too! You have a very smooth writing style that helped the story to flow along seemingly effortlessly. Also loved Last Tango in Forks which led me on to read more of your stories.
Nannygoat chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
OMG I am loving this, you really know how to drag the reader into the moment.x
mao nase chapter 21 . 3/20/2012
Sorry I could not respond more. I had no time at the end of a chapter to say anything, I just had to keep going :)
mao nase chapter 12 . 3/20/2012
now THAT was real vampire love. Damn
mao nase chapter 10 . 3/20/2012
Edwards POV is always better. You do a great job with it. How about trying the meadow scene from Twilight. I love S. Meyers, but I was so sorry that Morning Sun ended just a chapter too soon.
mao nase chapter 4 . 3/20/2012
damn, so hot.
soapladyjen chapter 7 . 3/1/2012
Mmmm...what a honeymoon!
soapladyjen chapter 6 . 3/1/2012
Yay! No biting!
soapladyjen chapter 5 . 3/1/2012
I love that you pretty much skipped over all things wedding, effectively doing a Fade To Black.

Oh, boy! Freaked out is an understatement! Poor guy! Bella's all blissed out, and he's in the bathroom on the verge of destroying her!
soapladyjen chapter 2 . 3/1/2012
Oh, bloody hell! If that's just the beginning of their steamy sexcapades, I don't know if I'm gonna make it all the way through this!
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