The last part or at least the last chapter of SMeyer's BD should've been EPOV. So we couldn't read how Edward finally got over his monstery thoughts. Niiiiccce ending

Thank Gid that this EPOV of BD is different from others. They copy it word for word, so I'm glad you changed certain things. Also, the part where Alice left/vision was much more clearer to me. Maybe because it was in EPOV instead of BPOV, but I get it more now. My only question is why did alice leave? I never got it...

I loved seeing this story from Edward's point of view. (Not to mention the scrumptious sex scenes that were denied us to keep the teen rating!) LOVED IT! If I smoked I would be enjoying a few right now! Thank you!

Really, really great. best one I have read!x

I enjoyed reading this.

It's a long time since I read Breaking Dawn so I'd forgotten some of the subtleties and I enjoyed re-experiencing them from Edward's POV.

I liked the way you kept Edward's voice close to canon but made his internal voice so much closer to what the average guy was likely to be thinking, complete with a temper and plenty of swearing.

The heat between Edward and Bella was impressive. Not to mention enjoyable ;-)

I enjoyed the lemons but also the little insights you added into Edward to a story we already know so well. I particularly enjoyed seeing the Volturi face off from Edward's perspective. I'd forgotten how desperate I was to know what Aro and Caius were thinking when I first read the book.

Thanks for sharing this x

Thank you so much for giving us some more Breaking Dawn Edward. I've always felt Edward was pushed into the background too much in BD and he deserved more. Lemons were delicious too! You have a very smooth writing style that helped the story to flow along seemingly effortlessly. Also loved Last Tango in Forks which led me on to read more of your stories.

OMG I am loving this, you really know how to drag the reader into the moment.x

Sorry I could not respond more. I had no time at the end of a chapter to say anything, I just had to keep going :)

now THAT was real vampire love. Damn

Edwards POV is always better. You do a great job with it. How about trying the meadow scene from Twilight. I love S. Meyers, but I was so sorry that Morning Sun ended just a chapter too soon.

damn, so hot.

Mmmm...what a honeymoon!

Yay! No biting!

I love that you pretty much skipped over all things wedding, effectively doing a Fade To Black.

Oh, boy! Freaked out is an understatement! Poor guy! Bella's all blissed out, and he's in the bathroom on the verge of destroying her!

Oh, bloody hell! If that's just the beginning of their steamy sexcapades, I don't know if I'm gonna make it all the way through this!