why Edward, its just beautiful...do you really think bella talks that way? stuuupid

did you have Edward think..."hehehe...me likey"? seriously? that's not fucking cute...EVER...don't make us hate your characters dumbass

so you would have us believe that a vamp..on a "frenzy" tried to NICELY claw at the door handle...but not break through the door? yaaaa suuuuree

I MUST have read that wrong...THeres no fucking way that ALICE Edwards SISTER just told him how HOT his encounter with bella was! That his sister ALICE was turned on by her BROTHERS encounter with bella.

SERIOUSLY? that's fucking gross! as if I didn't hate that meddling annoying whore enough already...now shes spying on her "best friends" man and getting turned on? what a nasty fucking whore!

Thanks for writing this wonderfull story!

Just because you are asking so nicely, here is a review especially for you: i love to read your story, you have a gifted way with words, your lemons are inspireing, my hubby is thankfull, although he Doesn't know where it comes from...

Excellent story!
Please write more stories like this . :-)

Oh THANK YOU so much! I have wanted a glimpse into Edward's mind for that chapter of BD since I first realized that SM had tried to give us MS. You gave me goosebumps it was so good! :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.

I'm sorry what? Tanya is striking? LOL did no one see her ugly ass in twilight? shes the ugliest sister!

I guess I kinda wanted to see some awe in Edward for bella...since she was able to give him a baby! something he thought he'd never have

I really enjoyed this story! It was very well written!

adored this, just fab x

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I am really angry at Bella. Even in Breaking dawn, it's really unfair to force him that way. A mother would do anything to her baby, but he should have a say in the matter, too. And she, out of all people, shouldn't be taking away his choices, considering how she felt the many times he did it to her.

IHAD A LOTOF FN ND REALY ENJOYED THIS STORY I DN KNOW WHY BT I IKE EPOV THE MOST THEYSOND MORE REAL T ME MORE HONEST AND FUNNY AS HELL

I LIKED THAT EDWARD COULD FEEL BELLAS SHIELD BUT COULDNT REMEMBER IT WAS BELLA