Reviews for Time To Be Bled
lakariana chapter 12 . 5/9
Hello, enjoyed your fic a lot, not seen many looking at the immediate fallout, most pick up when Jack is dropping everyone off. I liked your DCI and what was that phone call at the end? Was the Burger truck part of the cannibals or a victim?

Have you listened to Big Finish's Broken? It covers some of the angst you've highlighted. Thanks for writing.
BarbT chapter 12 . 3/4
What happened with Time to Heal? I was really looking forward to that...
FranArian chapter 12 . 6/22/2016
Well done.
Invisible Observer 3 chapter 12 . 2/18/2015
I love the story. I wish there was a sequel but I can see why you ended it there.
Buxom Bard chapter 2 . 4/28/2014
Alright! Finally got around to reading this! Back on the Torchwood wagon right now. Even working on a few fics (very beginning stages unfortunately). This is great so far, it's cyberwoman goodness wrapped up in countrycide goodness, it can't get much better then that! I do so hope we get a happy ending here? I am a stickler for those after all!

I can really see this being where Ianto is mentally after cyberwoman. Jack does make quiet a few mistakes with Ianto I felt (although I did always hate everyone's assumption that Owen would automatically be an ass about what happened. I felt after they gave him some background and we found out about Kate that Owen would've been pretty understanding about it once all was said and done, still pissed mind this is Owen we're talking about after all). I like that you don't seem to have them (Jack and Ianto) as being lovers already. I kept running into that and I always felt that didn't happen until after Lisa. The only thing I hate more are the fics where Jack rapes Ianto as punishment for what he did (I always found it hard to believe that someone who enjoys sex so much would use it in such an awful way).
FiBeeN chapter 12 . 3/27/2014
Fantastic! I didn't want it to end. You did a wonderful job . I can't wait to read more of your work.
ElementalFusion chapter 12 . 8/25/2013
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Tandy Sandman chapter 12 . 4/2/2013
Beautifully written. Thanks so much for sharing!
Raven's Dusk chapter 12 . 3/28/2013
Awww... Poor Ianto. he seriously needs to talk with Tosh. They need each other.

Jack is so funny... ;) He is gonna get his team...
Raven's Dusk chapter 11 . 3/28/2013
Aww.. This chapter was just adorable... :3
I love the team... ;D
The guy in the suit is interesting... You should do something more with him... :)
Raven's Dusk chapter 10 . 3/28/2013
Awww... Poor Ianto, and no-one knows what he really endured. :(
They all need to talk to someone...

Jack is so sweet! His concern would be adorable if he wasn't so scary... xD
Raven's Dusk chapter 9 . 3/28/2013
Awww... This chapter was beautiful. Really. The Tosh/Ianto interaction... Poor guys, they all feel guilty, but there's nothing they could've done.
And Jack talking to Owen about staying save was just wonderful. :3
Raven's Dusk chapter 8 . 3/28/2013
God, poor Ianto. He had the most to endure, and yet still carries on... :)

I feel bad for Gwen... Even battling aliens she still was somehow pure, she didn't think such cruelty was possible... :(
Raven's Dusk chapter 7 . 3/28/2013
Oh my god! These people are sick! How could they do that! *hugs Ianto*
And during all of this he still thinks he deserves it... :(

Why did you let them go through the woods to the slaughter house?
Raven's Dusk chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
Ooouuhhh... Poor guys... :/ I love knowing they will all get out alright... ;)

You know, I think you did a pretty good job of converting it into a fic... All the thoughts and feelings, and it's not too much. Great work! :D
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