|Reviews for Saliva|
| dead-angels-command chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
if only there were a sequel!
| anime-lover890 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Well I would say this was a good lemon, it wasn't too long or short and the pace was good I felt, a lil ooc here and there aint a bad thing I really liked it, hope ya do more cause I love this pair _
| Rim-Lickin chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
my parents kept coming into ma room sayin YOU ALRIGHT ?
cuz ma laughin and gigglin and "ohohohohohhoho"-ing
made me sound like a santa on crack.
| Sevvi chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
Hehe. Karin is so smart... Hahaha. I really do just love her.
| Strawberry-Ringo chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Hehe! Hichigo is so...pursuasive! XD I love how well this story is written, and how in character they are at the end of it.
| EasternSunflower chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
It's Good For A First, The Actual Lemon Was Good, But The Whole Innocence Thing, In My Opinion, Wasn't Too Good. I Also Think The Whole "Love" Thing Was A Little Far Fetched, But Over All, A Very Good First .
| Kinda.Sorta.Insane chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
seriously, it didn't seem like it was your first yaoi. its better than alot of peoples tenth or eleventh. but thats just what i think.
| kurokitsune666 chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Its a great story!
| sadist-seme chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
this was a really good fic. I barely belive that this is your first on all three! You have skills
| grimmich chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
ah, that was cute..
| XxRawrMooMeowxX chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
EVEN KNOW IT WAS UR FIRST U DID AWESOME
YOU SHOLUD UP DATE THE CHAP
I SURE ILL READ IT
| mama-Ichigo chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
HA! LOL! Tht was funny, have you ever thought of doing a fic where Hichi and Ichi are seperate people?
| Kirtash8 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Wow, that was a very good fanfic!I really like it!*_* And the lemon also very good!I really like when Hichigo says that of jumping him XDXD And the end was epic!I hope you'll continue writing more stories like this
| SanitysOverrated87 chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
it was good :)
| InspireInspireInspire chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
haha, short but sweet. The ending was amusing. Karin is much like her brother in many ways. haha xD It'd make sense for her to know what happened.