Reviews for Rooftop
Obsessed Dreamer chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Having been in a LDR myself, I'd say it's really difficult. But there are also those that have succeeded in it. And I'm interested to see how Tokiya and Fuuko can hurdle that particular obstacle. So I vote for multi-chap fic. But this fic is good enough as it currently is :)
Clovergirl100 chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
It was soooo cute!
Clovergirl100 chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
It was soooo cute!
forbiddenME024 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
you need to update this fic chie tomorii.. hehe.. i want to know what will happen to ToFuu.. hehe. please please please.. update this fic of yours.. *wink*
TuckingFypo chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
ARGH! Why? Oh why did you have to do that? XD

It was...kinda sad and somewhat a cliffy...
Tinny chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
naishi...sorry bading, but i think ito na ang pinaka paborito ko na sinulat mo...as in... so proud of you :) and yes, parang familiar ako sa story..hmm why kaya? lol love it dude...i can never see why you doubt your abilities to write...seriously...i only write emails and letters, not fiction...lol great job honey! i'm so proud of you...

intricate details...hay buhay...oks na oks
Daisuke Akio chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
I'd agree with the other reviewers; this should definitely be a one-shot. From the moment it started, the "good stuff" are already there (kinda hard to explain, but yeah), so adding more to the story would mean making it more stale as it goes - like a downward slope, if you know what I mean ;)

Although I feel it's a bit short (but that's just me, I think), other than that, really great stuff. Keep it up; we need more stuff like this! :D
iamhermionemalfoy chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Aww, that was so sweet and sad at the same time. :( BTW, you're Pina/oy too, right? Hello. :)
WordsAndDoodles chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Aww. It's both funny and sweet, and I'm kinda torn between wanting a next chapter and wanting it as it is. But meh, I've always been ambivalent regarding one-shots with not-so-happy endings. :)

Do continue writing, the ToFuu sections needs pumping up.

Cheers! ;)

Eka
Iska chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
I've been out of the loop for so long when it comes to fanfictions, so reading this was very refreshing for me. Despite the minor errors (which of course I presume are merely typos), the story is well-written, and I'm sure a lot the readers can relate to this story considering how, for the lack of a better word, rampant long-distance relationships are. Also, the fact that the author has based the story on her personal experience made the fic even more realistic and relevant. I'm quite certain that her personal touch on the story to give more weight on its realism tugs on the readers' heartstrings.

For my two cents, please leave the story as it is. Adding more chapters would only force you to build on the drama you have established on this one-shot fic.
Eirist chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
gawd chie-chan. it made me want to slump at the corner of my room and cry. tch! wah! you made me sad! :P but i love it. it's so true, so real... so like what happens in real life. *reads author's notes* ok. that's why. but real life is still one of the best basis for one's story right? and even if it isn't a happy ending, it's fine since the story is well written. :P

this is just my opinion. but i like it as it is. one-shot. hehe! but the choice is yours. hehehe! :D
satomika chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
honestly...

i fell in love at the middle of reading this fic...

but you just have to break my heart...

but i'm still hoping that it would stay as a one-shot...

coz i'm thinking that the drama i've felt (after reading a cowboy bebop fic, S/F pairing) would just leave my soul if you decided to make it multi-chaptered...

but i'll still read whatever decision you might make...

this one's true:

'He doesn’t want to ruin the strongest foundation they have built as friends.'

this one made me tear up:

'Cupping her face with both of his hands, he whispered, “Look, I’m won’t ask you to be my girlfriend, but you’re the one closest to my heart. That’s the only thing I can assure you. I won’t say goodbye to you, but I can’t give you anything.”

and this one... gah!

i take risks but not when it comes to love...

it's the only door i haven't opened yet...

but anyway, i always wish that the pairings i like should always take a risk no matter what...

coz for me, in other fields, i take risks...

like...

i always think that i've got nothing to lose...

except when i have to apologize...

i have the same size as a man's egotistical ego...

i care a lot for my pride coz i always feel it's the only thing i've got in the world...

gah! what am i saying...

i'm babbling...

having some drama hang-over from reading bebop fics...

anyway...

here is the last line in your story...

'They both know that long distance do not work well, and none of them wanted to take the risk.'

(don't ask me why i like putting punch lines or whatever it is from author's fics during my reviews...they just help me remember something whenever i leave and come around to make me think again... _ )

oh, and before i leave, i hope you update soon on your other unfinished fics...

ciao!