|Reviews for Sand Between Your Toes|
| Valkyries-grave chapter 1 . 1/16
Hey, this isn't particularly about this story, but could you post where else you may be posting new ff?
| KanameBlaise chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Very heart warming. I enjoyed that Zexion is the one displaying his insecurities. It's not generally like that. It made my heart twist for him.
| DeepInTheShadows12345 chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
awwwww! no words could say how good this was! X3 I adored this! At first I thought something bad was going to happen and I saw scared and ready for tears, but I loved he ending! Great job!
| WindRush chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Aww, this was so adorably cute!
| Winged Cherry chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Cute. Just. So cute, and touching.
A change of view on their relationship is really refreshing. Not many authors out there have thought of how difficult it must be for Demyx to be in a relationship with someone as introvert as Zexion.
P.s. Such a sweet idea to mouth 'I love you' against your lover's lips.
| CuteVampireCollie chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
This made me feel so sad in a way because I can see where you made Demyx come from. When I get into a relationship I will wonder when that person is going to leave me, not because I don't trust them, but because I don't think I'm lovable. Anyways, I apologize for my rambling. ; And I really, really like this. It just brought on so many emotions!
| Teru-tan chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
This was absolutely amazing. I am not one for writing good reviews, but I will tell you now that this is a really lovely Zemyx piece. :3
| 123OpHeLiAc456 chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Im seriously in pain,Im fighting the urge to favorite EVERYTHING you write...So imc comproimising...add you as my favrorite author, and some of your amazing stories.
| belle-kell chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
That was AMAZING- I... I... no words for this. I'm speechless.
| Eternal Grey chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
you keep making me cry wit ur fics and I'm not a crier... I must be in a mood. I love this one too though.
| Himitsu Miko chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
Aw, so cute! i love it. it's a sweet idea too. and the boys are beautifully IC XD
| aomoa chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Nice. Its well written
| dragontwin99 chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
| Vampire148 chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
"'I'm just feeling wistful, I guess.' You laugh once, and close your eyes. 'Six years is an awful long time.'
'No, it's not.'
He's looking at you. His book lies on the sand, half open, pages crinkling. And he's not bending to pick it up. He's looking at you, and that look is back on his face, and why, why has he never stopped taking your breath away?
'It's not long at all,' he says, quietly."
Even though this is in second person, I can just feel myself in Zexion's shoes, because I have given that LOOK countless times before. Because, really, it isn't long at all, and there's a REASON he's only said it twice, but it's Demyx and that's all that matters. *tear* Even from just one person, you do a great job of stretching out to other characters. I really enjoyed this.
| Mimay chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I read this some time last year, and as always I didn't review as soon as I was meant to. Reading it again, though I remembered how sad and sweet it was as well as favouring the same scene again. It's because of the scene, that I was desperate to read the story again, it's only so lucky that I didn't have to browse countless pages because I've favoured many of your stories. Your stories of Zex and Demyx are always wonderful with that right amount of drama and sweetness. They're endearing, hands down. I do hope you keep writing, can't say I'll wait till we're on Mars, but I'll wait something close to it.