Reviews for Five Stages of Loss
Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 3 . 3/5/2012
When you said you had everything planned out in the first chapter's AN, do you still? It dropped off here... but that's so sad. It was so wonderful so far, is there a particular reason you couldn't continue it? I'm kind of on a Lucky low right now, so I'm busy scrabbling up any Lucky stories I possibly can. And this one is so fantastic, and already halfway done... I mean, only two chapters left, that's not that much. But in a story only 5 chapters long, that's a lot of the story still unwritten. And you said the last two would be less difficult to write than the third, yes?

Urgh, I hate to plead authors to write, mainly because I know personally how hard it is sometimes. But it seems like such a waste for such a lovely piece to be forever unfinished. And I know that going back to a story after a few years' break is particularly difficult. But if there's any hope that this story will be finished, I'd like to encourage that. I'd certainly love to see it.

Regardless, thanks for writing. Even this much is wonderful.
TealEyedBeing chapter 3 . 10/20/2011
:D my goodness this is wonderful :3 i hope to see the fourth and fifth stages soon! ;D
Yueaifeng chapter 3 . 3/27/2011
This is a wonderful story. Each chapter just gets better and better. I see it hasn't been updated for a very long time and I'm starting to doubt you're going to update it, but this is a more than lovely story that I think is well-written and very touching. It just kind of reaches into the roots of the pairing and I just... really like it. o no

thank you for posting it.
Lilec chapter 3 . 5/22/2010
I figured I could rebuke your claim that this is not about loss, because I kinda think it is. Except what they lost - or are losing - is not a life. Lavi's losing his hold on his emotions and his Bookman side, and perhaps his mind. And Tyki . . . no, I'm not quite sure what he's losing, just that he's losing something. His self-confidence, perhaps? Or something. The point is, it is about loss. And gain, in a way. And I like that.
Mochizuki chapter 3 . 10/22/2009
I loved it! *-*

But please don't make a sad ending, I don't wanna cry. ç_ç

I really like that pairing.

Really nice fic. :D
Rai Walk chapter 3 . 10/5/2009

Deliciously dark and bittersweet. Lucky at the core.
littleonegi chapter 3 . 9/16/2009
This is really good.
Tofu-Master chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
Well now...i must say, i REALLY like where yer goin' with this! Lucky is my favorite DGM pairin', but it's jus' so hard ta find good ones. I believe i've hit the jackpot with this one, my dear.

In any case, please update soon, ne? 3

Ja ne!

Lil' Miss Spookiness chapter 3 . 7/29/2009
aww this was reli sad

i hope they stay together, but from the title im not sure if thatll happen

plz update soon

btw this fic is reli well written!
Steamcraft chapter 3 . 7/29/2009
D' Oh-so saddening~'s just so perfect! -squees- Oh my goodness, there's been plenty of great Lucky uploads today, and yours was the cream on the cake!


"He was almost comforted, in an odd way, by the ticking bomb inside him. At least it was like a bit of Tyki."

Oh, I so can't wait for the next chapter, and please let it be soon!
artemis89 chapter 3 . 7/28/2009
i'm so happy that you finally updated this and this chapter is my favorite one (at least for the moment, i don't know what that little, cute, fantastic mind of you is plotting). and don't worry, for me it make sense. YAY, so much love!

i'll wait the following one. see ya _
winegoldsayuri chapter 3 . 7/28/2009
I really love your story so far :3 you wrote the hard part really good (and it did make sense). The "Love me or I'll eat you!"-idea is really good, it's something I think Tyki would really do. You write Lucky really nice
this be a dead account chapter 3 . 7/28/2009
The- the butterfly inside him. ;A; This was a sad chapter. xD I hate you. And what made it worse was that I was cracking up half the time of the serious part, because of Devito daring Jasdero to eat chalk. xDD

God, I dunno what else to say.. ;A;

It's sad sad sad stuff. Damn.

Feliks ukasiewicz chapter 2 . 6/26/2009

You need to, like, update, woman.

I'm being totally serious, too.

(-like, totally abusing anon reviewing-)
Rodnii chapter 2 . 5/16/2009
Ooh, I can't wait for a new chapter! This is pretty much the only DGM pairing I absolutely love, and you've written this so well! And Road would totally take in stride, I like how you did that conversation. Don't go jumping off cliffs. XD
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