Reviews for Past
Rosie eisoR chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
I am distraught that you've changed the title, but otherwise I still love it - and it makes the point where he dismisses Delia in canon all the more poignant.
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Good idea on this one! I really enjoyed it. You do have a lot of seemingly unnecessary commas, especially near the end. Good job!