|Reviews for Combustion|
| Monk'ichii chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
LOVE IT ! The little RoyAi at the end... So cute !
| Queen Bovine chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
I love this! Ed's got his "Hero of the People" vibe going on, and Roy can't find it in himself to fault him for it.
| Blondynka chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Though I see no reason to review it, since it's all too cute, but since people judge fics from the number of reviews I guess I might as well write something. Love seeing the gentle side of Roy :D superb, I love it :)!
| little miss clueless chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
nicely done... keep it up!
| 070 chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Ah, I love it! The parental!RoyEd and the subtle RoyRiza. Always a good combo.
| yuuram shibuy von bielefeld chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
nice fic:D but are you talking about elizabeth as in riza?you know her in disguise? her uh... code name is elizabeth, havoc is jacqueline or somrthiglike that... anyways cute fic if your talking about riza-elizabeth...:D
| Firing Rockets on Dragons chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Aw. I love the ending. Who would've thought that Ed's over-spending would be a great plot device! I love this. Awesome work!
| momiji-k chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
Ah, Elizabeth. Roy's one and only love. :)
That was a great little fic. Very enjoyable. :) Good job!
| Illa Scriptor chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Seriously. That was adorable. And everyone was perfectly in character.
| Sakura Hitsugaya chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
| Rissy chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Teeheehee _ How cute. Gotta love Hawkeye _
| RedAmaranth chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Oh, I love it!
I love how Roy had the intention of making Ed pay for everything, but changed his mind when he found out what Ed had spent the money on. ]
And I love the interaction between Riza and Roy. Absolutely in-character. Good job!
| havocmangawip chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
I love this. Ed's soft heart... Mustang's not giving in to the temptation to torch Ed and finally "getting it".
I love the end. :) I love the manga code names. :D
| Ruingaraf chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Aha, cute, and in-character. Parental!RoyEd ftw. You did slip up and say dollars, though, when he mentioned it being due immediately.
| Boo Lemming chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Poor Riza, having such a time keeping the Colonel in check...maybe Ed's not the only one who needs a break D:
Speaking of Riza, did you use the name Elizabeth intentionaly because it's her code name? Sorry, I can never pick up on things like that very well .''