Reviews for Chaos Theory
hotforteacher3 chapter 3 . 11/25/2011
Oh my SQUEEEEEE! please write more!
alisosia chapter 3 . 10/3/2010
Great story I really hope you post more to it
Leximaven chapter 3 . 8/14/2010
Hehe! Giggles abounded when reading this!

"Will ya marry me, darlin'?"

Did you know its really difficult to sigh and giggle at once? And yet I often seem to manage it...

Very cute! LOVE!

Love that Mal didn't even work it out for himself. If anyone's the boob, it's him!
Leximaven chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Oh my gosh! Yay! Exciting! River's pregnant! Yay!

I've never read a story like this before, should be interesting!

And she reads on...
morgan allayne chapter 3 . 7/24/2010
i want to see more! i find it funny everyone but mal knew before it was spoken out loud...
Stolen Quill chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
This story is so gorgeous! The language and dialogue was spot-on and your explanations on how the crew came to find out about Jayne and River was also true to character. I loved it and hope you'll continue with this story in the future! :)
princes chapter 3 . 4/16/2010
sweet storoy, i like it... would love to read more
Cede-Lede chapter 3 . 3/25/2010
Ahahahahahaha! "You and you! So freaky and wrong I don't even know where to start." Omg, so funny! I can just imagine the exact way Mal would say that. Loved all of this.
unlock.your.heart chapter 3 . 10/10/2009
I liked this a lot. If you have the urge, I'd like to see more of this story.
Basched chapter 3 . 9/11/2009
Oh HOW I love this! I could clearly see the faces, hear their voices, everything was perfectly IC and just too damned high-larious!

Great piece and a definate favourite.
Whyt Wulf chapter 3 . 7/28/2009
I enjoy your writing style very much and, as opposed as I was to Rayne when I first started reading fanfic, I find it's grown on me. I hope you do decide to add to this story eventually.

By the way, I think you were spot on with Jayne's speech and personality.
RJ Steamboat chapter 3 . 7/26/2009
if i wer a girl, i'd squee. but i'm not, so i won't. but i liked this. more? )
Stormbringer951 chapter 3 . 6/18/2009
Hehehe. A sweet ending, and lovely characterisation. Please write more Firefly.
Ravenclaw Samurai chapter 3 . 5/25/2009
Yes! Yes! Yes! I'd love to see more! This is so cute and fun. Chapter 3 was especially nice since we got perspectives on how the crew found out and then Jayne proposing to River! Wow! I'd love to see more of this Verse! :D
ive-already-seen-hell chapter 3 . 4/12/2009
YAY! I LOVE THIS FIC! IT WOULD BE GREAT IF YOU JUST KEPT ON THIS STORY FOR AWHILE! I LOVE THE 'SPECIAL HELL'! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! :)
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