Reviews for Children of Ra
carolina1k chapter 2 . 4/25
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Arivania Moons chapter 10 . 2/29
I just wish that the baby had been kept and given a chance at life. Poor little thing...
Arivania Moons chapter 8 . 2/29
Also, Ra was married to either Ma'at, or another goddess, but I've seen him placed as Ma'at's husband more often then not.
Sarah chapter 36 . 2/24
Hi there I loved your story and I would love it if you could make an sequel to this story because it's a really good story and ending of this story
Lulumo chapter 13 . 2/25
Damn I totally love badass Yugi. I would be nice if Yugi is the dominant one *smirk*
Hiei Dragon Girl chapter 36 . 2/23
Awe! I loved this story!
SweetAnimeLover chapter 36 . 1/8
Fun story
Guest chapter 30 . 12/2/2015
Wong was her husband and Vivian was her daughter right? I got it right didn't I?
ichigo'ssneakyfox chapter 24 . 3/25/2015
Smashgunner chapter 33 . 1/20/2015
Here is how I wanted their punishment to be. 30 min of whipping, cutsball around their arms beaten until they pass out drowning until they almost die and then dropped from the top of the palace into 1 lions place for a slow painful death
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 35 . 11/9/2014
Darn it, I was hoping for twins.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 33 . 11/9/2014
Why do you repeat information? You could have just had the scene with Yugi or the one in the courtroom, you didn't need both.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 29 . 11/9/2014
Henge! yes!
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 21 . 11/9/2014
I feel like you need to mix up your action with your dialogue, and you could have more descriptions.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 9 . 11/9/2014
I think you made Yuugi just a little too awesome. Powers I can believe, but memorizing all the laws? And Ra and Isis are gods, I think they'd merit a bit more respect than that. Although I did love the part where Ra asked the pharaoh to look after Yugi, it's such a sweet scene.
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