Reviews for It only hurts when I breathe
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
So, I wholeheartedly agree with InLoveWithEC. You wrote just over MAYBE 2/3 paragraphs (which to be honest, were only decent, at best), wrote out lyrics to a song (not very creative) then copied word for word what was written in the book. You didn't even mention in the disclaimer that you copied SMs exact words. Sorry if it sounds harsh, but it's the truth.
RandiA.K.AMiranda chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
i like the story
looneybaloony chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
i LOVED your story! it was so good!

great writing!

InLoveWithEC chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
So not to be mean or anything, but I may as well have grabbed my New Moon book and read it, you were basically reciting it word for word.
MuseAlongMeghan chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
that was amazing! i love how you incorporated the real dialogue with your own work! it was so well written! x