|Reviews for So They Danced in the Rain|
| DoodleMeNow chapter 1 . 12/23/2017
Poorly written, my foot. This deserves at least 1k favorites
| Breanna3593 chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Poorly written you say? Well then I'd be amazed as to the quality of your other stories.
This was as cute as it was random. Still good!
| Scars for Blood chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
that was so cute! :)
| Alice Everdeen chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Okie doke. That was impossibly sweet. You have no idea how much of an amazing author you are. Your work should be published, this stuff is fantastic.
| True Colours chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Yay! This is the first fic I've read about the time before Jasper and Alice joined the Cullens, and I love how you've shown the speed with which they fall in love.
"Green, I think. Ain't positive though." In this line, I somehow got his accent so clearly. Dancing in the rain is typical of Alice's insanity, and I love how, with him remembering his cat's name, you've shown how Alice is already helping him to regain his humanity.
| UnnaturalKetchupTaco chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Very very beatiful. Very cute. And really really great.
| MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
AW THATS SO CUTE
| love2talk96 chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Jasper is my favorite Cullen/Hale! He is so sweet when he is with Alice! It makes me want him all for myself! I had a cat name Midnight when I was little, because he was black and white and we could only see part of him at night. I miss that cat... Anywho! Great story, really sweet!
| UrStewyBomb chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Oh wow this was so sweet! I love Alice and Jasper and have been trying to write a one-shot about them but hve yet to come up with a good idea.
I think it is written really well aswell its awesome!
| BellaBambina91 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Damn... if this is you writing badly, I can't wait to read your stuff well written... This was amazing... I love that it's a one-shot... short and sweet... I love Alice and Jasper so I have to thank you... "that's what the storm's for" was my absolute favorite line... this was beautiful and romantic (kind of made me want to grab a man and dance in the rain). good job
| DobbyWobby chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
oh, this is swet and beautiful. i love it!
| SCREAMINGwhispers chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
No! This is neither plotless nor badly written. It was very good and very cute. Good job-and don't underestimate your writing!
| angeleyes4696 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
For a story "without a plot" and written for the "bored" it was unbelievably beautiful and wonderfully written. ;) Now I'm off to investigate your other stories...I hope there's more anyway. Thank you for this one!
| Leucothea29 chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
I enjoyed it, sweet and a little fluffy. Thanks.
| CuttlefishRock chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
are you freaking kidding? "poorly written"?
that was genius! amazing! i'm off to look at any other stories you've written!